Draft talk:Awork (software)
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I am an employee of awork GmbH and have contributed to this draft. I have disclosed my connection on my user page. I am contributing in accordance with Wikipedia’s conflict of interest policies and am open to suggestions for further improvement or neutrality.
Thank you for reviewing my previous submission and for the valuable feedback. I’ve carefully revised the draft to fully align with Wikipedia’s neutrality and notability guidelines.
Specifically, I have:
- Removed all promotional or marketing-style phrasing, especially in the software and history sections.
- Eliminated company mission statements and any claims not supported by independent sources.
- Clarified the article’s focus to be consistently about the company awork GmbH rather than the product.
- Strengthened sourcing by using additional independent, reliable, published sources.
- Incorporated community feedback from the Wikipedia Teahouse and the previous reviewer (Rambley), including examples of promotional tone and structure.
I hope that these revisions address the prior concerns, and I would truly appreciate a fresh review of the updated draft.
Thank you again for your time and help in guiding this article toward publication!