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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 12:01, 1 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

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  • "David Reutimann, Truex, Stewart, Logano, and Denny Hamlin rounded out the first ten positions." Change first to top.
  • "The race, the third in the season, began a 3:00 p.m. EST" Began at 3:00 p.m. you mean.
  • "During the pace laps, Hamlin had to move to the rear of the grid because of changing his engine" Rewrite to: "During the pace laps, Hamlin had to move to the rear of the grid because of him changing his engine"
  • "By lap 24, Stewart maintained a 1.7 second lead over the second position" Change the second position to Busch
  • "Stewart increased his lead to 1.6 second" Change second to seconds.
  • "By lap 159, Edwards had a 1.25 lead over Truex. Add second to this sentence.
  • "Nine laps later, the seventh was given after Gordon collided into the wall after having a flat tire. Add caution to this sentence.
  • "10.1 million people watched the race on television." Also state that a total of 152,000 people attended the race, adding a source as well.

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  • Link the publishers of these sources.

That's all the issues I could find. I will promote once they are addressed. good888 (talk) 12:01, 1 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again! I'm driving from Florida to Virginia today, and then Delaware tomorrow, but I'll get to these as soon as I can. --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 12:50, 1 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Good888: Okay, I think it's  Done, except the attendance is already mentioned at the beginning of the post-race section, thus it is omitted to avoid redundancy. Thanks, --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 00:58, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Bentvfan54321: Lovely job. Promoting to GA class again. good888 (talk) 09:43, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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