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A fact from J. Leo Hafen appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 4 June 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that J. Leo Hafen was excommunicated from The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints for being associated with a religious group practicing wife sacrifice?

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Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:03, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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... that J. Leo Hafen was excommunicated from the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints for being associated with a religious group practicing wife sacrifice? Source: "Mormon Church Bans New Cult". The Salt Lake Tribune. March 17, 1921. Retrieved 4 May 2020. Source: Rossiter, Shawn. "J. Leo Hafen". 15 Bytes. Artists of Utah. Retrieved 29 April 2020.
- ALT1:... that J. Leo Hafen was the first person to introduce color photography to Utah? Source: Rossiter, Shawn. "J. Leo Hafen". 15 Bytes. Artists of Utah. Retrieved 29 April 2020.

Reviewed: The Crime and the Silence
Comment: Moved to mainspace May 5 2020
Comment: I'll be taking over this DYK nomination for Skyes(BYU), so please direct feedback to my talk page. Thank you! Rachel Helps (BYU) (talk) 14:58, 11 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Moved to mainspace by Skyes(BYU) (talk). Self-nominated at 16:38, 8 May 2020 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall:

Original hook is much more interesting than ALT1, so I recommend using that one. The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 06:15, 29 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]