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May 2024 NPP backlog drive – Points award

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The New Page Patroller's Barnstar

This award is given in recognition to HitroMilanese for accumulating at least 100 points during the May 2024 NPP backlog drive. Your contributions helped play a part in the 14,452 reviews completed during the drive. Thank you so much for taking part and contributing to help reduce the backlog! Hey man im josh (talk) 18:58, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Decline of Chief Dr. (Sir) Godwin Ubaka Okeke, MON profile

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Good day, thank you so much for your quick review. please, could you please assist me? kindly drop your email or any contact. thanks alot as i await your prompt response. Dekozy (talk) 13:56, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Dekozy
Hello there,
How can I assist you? You may contact me anytime here. Regards Hitro talk 14:00, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Please, I need your assistance on how to make the profile worth publishing on wikipedia. Dekozy (talk) 14:03, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Please review WP:YFA thoroughly, it provides all the essential information you need to create an article on Wikipedia. Hitro talk 14:13, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Why was this page declined

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Hi @HitroMilanese Could you please drop an email as to why this page has been declined as all the relevant fields have been put up as per the existing rules of Wikipedia SSChhetri (talk) 09:30, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SSChhetri
Hi there,
Unfortunately, your article has been declined for several reasons.
Firstly, the subject of your article does not meet Wikipedia's notability guidelines. For inclusion, subjects must satisfy the criteria outlined in the general notability guideline and the specific notability guideline for authors WP:NAUTHOR. Please review these guidelines carefully.
Secondly, a significant portion of the draft lacks proper sourcing. To demonstrate notability and ensure verifiability, it is essential to include references from independent and reliable sources. You also need to see WP:REFBEG for placing your citations properly at the end of sentences.
Additionally, it appears that the article may be an autobiography. Autobiographies are generally discouraged on Wikipedia because maintaining neutrality and verifiability is challenging, and there are numerous potential issues associated with self-written entries.
I hope this explanation clarifies the reasons for the decline. Regards. Hitro talk 18:10, 17 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

PAR Technology Draft AfC

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Hi there, thank you for reviewing my first Wikipedia article submission!

For some background/context, I had initially tabled my suggestion to the Deletion review folks here who seemed open to having a draft submitted: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Deletion_review/Log/2024_June_13

I understood that my article may have read more like an advertisement. I had tried to be as simple and objective as possible with my language, and to cite reputable independent sources for my content to demonstrate notability. Any feedback would be welcomed on which parts may have sounded like an ad. Maybe I missed the mark being too detailed to try and showcase notability? Happy to delete and edit it as necessary. LeLiPAR (talk) 20:41, 17 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello there,
The version of the draft that I declined was promotional. I see that CSD has been declined after your improvement. I am not fully convinced that it is meeting WP:NCOMPANY therefore I will leave this draft for a fresh pair of eyes. Regards. Hitro talk 17:47, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Review sources

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Hello, can you review the sources of this article and confirm its acceptance Draft:Mohamed Aarab DRsabire (talk) 12:19, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Moved to draft page of my article

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Hi please send your review comments about why you rejected my article main page "Muthamilselvi" First tamil woman scaled mount everest. TheValorWomanMTS (talk) 11:24, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello there,
Firstly, it appears that you have either written an autobiography or have a significant conflict of interest (COI) with the subject. COI editing is discouraged on Wikipedia. I have left a message on your talk page regarding COI; please read it along with the associated links. Drafts with potential COI must go through the Articles for Creation (AfC) process.
Secondly, many of the claims in your draft lack proper sourcing. Please refer to Wikipedia's verifiability policy and support your statements with citations from independent and reliable sources. Additionally, see the guidelines on inline citations and ensure that citations are placed correctly at the end of the relevant sentences, rather than clustered at the bottom of the draft.
I would like to note that the notability of the subject has not been challenged. The primary issue is the lack of references. Please address these concerns and resubmit your draft for another review.
Regards. Hitro talk 11:35, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi hitro, thank you . i will check and will do the needful. TheValorWomanMTS (talk) 11:41, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:The Wikipedia

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Hi, I really want to do a sponsor on Wikipedia to welcome people to Wikipedia, honest. By The Allay King 118.210.162.3 (talk) 11:02, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi,
You may want to join Wikipedia Welcoming Committee. Here you can welcome new user and help them. Regards. Hitro talk 11:12, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Larry Lipshultz Wikipedia

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Hi, you had left a comment on this draft a few months ago. I made the changes requested and wanted to know if you could review it again. Thanks! Oppename (talk) 16:06, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello there,
I see that you have updated the references. The draft is waiting to be reviewed, I will leave it for another reviewer as I am unable to verify all the sources at the moment. Regards. Hitro talk 11:03, 5 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
okay Mr. HitroMilanese, Thankyou Anoopshukla12 (talk) 16:59, 5 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Unknown

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Why was this page deleted sir, first of all this page was deleted due to speedy deletion, then this page was published again after correction, still it was deleted, how can I see it live । thankyou Anoopshukla12 (talk) 09:57, 5 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there,
Most of your articles or drafts have been deleted due to promotional content or lack of notability. Please see WP:YFA before attempting another topic. Regards. Hitro talk 11:07, 5 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

New article

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HI @HitroMilanese

I have created a new page on Bengali series Kaantaye Kaantaye.

Request you to look into it and suggest what I could do to make it better and if possible review it.


Thanks a bunch Filmy World (talk) 01:19, 7 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Filmyworldwiki
Hi there,
Thank you for your efforts in creating this article. However, the series has not yet been released and most of the presented sources are announcements. I recommend adding reviews from independent and reliable sources as soon as they become available to ensure the subject's notability is well-supported. Regards. Hitro talk 11:34, 7 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC dispute: Roger Bright

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Hi! I would like to dispute your recent rejection of the AfC draft for Roger Bright. You claimed he does not fill Wikipedia's notability requirements for musicians, however he fulfills the following requirements as I explain in the brackets following the requirement:

  1. Has been the subject of multiple, non-trivial, published works appearing in sources that are reliable, not self-published, and are independent of the musician or ensemble itself [he has full page articles about himself from the International Polka Association, the Cleveland-Style Polka Hall of Fame, and the Racine Journal Times, among others]
  2. Has released two or more albums on a major record label or on one of the more important indie labels (i.e., an independent label with a history of more than a few years, and with a roster of performers, many of whom are independently notable) [has released 35 records on Cuca Records, an important independent record label]
  3. Is an ensemble that contains two or more independently notable musicians, or is a musician who has been a reasonably prominent member of two or more independently notable ensembles [He has performed in ensembles with Joey Miskulin, Frankie Yankovic, and Slavko Avsenik, all of whom are independently notable musicians]
  4. Has become one of the most prominent representatives of a notable style or the most prominent of the local scene of a city [the most prominent representative of both the city of New Glarus and of polka music in New Glarus]
  5. Has won first, second, or third place in a major music competition [Not strictly a competition, but I believe being inducted into 3 different Polka Hall of Fames counts as "winning" those competitions]
  6. Has performed music for a work of media that is notable, such as a theme for a network television show, performance in a television show or notable film, inclusion on a notable compilation album [has performed on the Tonight Show with Johnny Carson, the Phil Donahue Show, and the Charlotte Peters Show, among others]


A musician is notable for Wikipedia if they meet at least one of those requirements, and Roger Bright meets six. I resubmitted my article, so I hope you take the chance to reassess your decision. Thanks! Zhuvelo (talk) 16:47, 7 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Garrett_Armfield

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Hello,

First of all thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. I see you are the editor of UFC Bantamweight Garrett Armfield's draft. I have edited the draft and added references to the text which was originally written by the fighter himself. I have had issues with his last fight: I added it, but the row was added horizontally instead of vertically.


If you'd be so kind as to help me with it, I would really appreciate it, and I am sure Garrett Armfield (who is aware of my effort to get his Wikipedia article up) would be, too.


Thanks LongTimeLurkerFirstTimeUser (talk) 17:45, 11 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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help

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Hello I want to start my wiki journey, I see a lot of miss-information, edits that need to be fixed as well as wikis that should be added, can you please help me on my journey? Popalien (talk) 17:07, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi!!
How can I help you?
I wanted to let you know that I've been quite busy with offline commitments and haven't been able to log in regularly over the past few weeks. If you need immediate assistance, I recommend reaching out to the WP:TEAHOUSE for help. Regards. Hitro talk 11:34, 6 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Could you assist and help me improve my draft?

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@HitroMilanese Hey sorry to bother you, I'm extremely new to this platform and I was wondering if you could help with my current draft at the moment. [1] I specifically need help with citations and references. If you can help that would be awesome. Asdf;jldsafdl (talk) 04:03, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

How

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how does a comet appears not meet the notability guide lines Relishmelon (talk) 19:27, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

its a beloved piece of indie music, that should get an article along with some of the other songs that the shins have gotten an article for Relishmelon (talk) 19:30, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi there,
Please see WP:NSONG and let me know how this song meets the criteria outlined there? All the provided sources focus on the album, with none specifically covering this song. Regards. Hitro talk 10:04, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Thanks for the kind help.

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The Barnstar of Diligence
Thanks for helping me. I was unaware that you took huge effort when someone draftified an article "W.i.S.H." created by me. Thanks a lot. Waonderer (talk) 07:23, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks a lot. Hitro talk 14:38, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reason for creating page

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Hi, sir. The main reason for creating this page is recognition. That actor voiced the characters of the most popular Indian produced animation tv series which ran for more than 5 years including films. While searching the internet for his interviews and articles, I found that there is photo of another Bengali actor with same name, instead of this comedian in the Motu Patlu cast and crew page. That is a big mistake people will think that Bengali actor's contribution while the real one is unkown. So I am still searching for official sites mentioning his works and similar things to make his Wikipedia page approved. Menarie221 (talk) 05:45, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Frederic Kimball

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Hello Why do you say my sources are not reliable, it is all in an article from Variety, a well known cinema publication. I did put the reference under Frankybonesmister (talk) 14:31, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello there,
Large portion of the submission still appears unsourced. Please see WP:REFBEG and place your citations properly so that the claims can be verified. In order to demonstrate notability, it is also recommended to add multiple sources where the topic has received significant coverage. Regards. Hitro talk 14:38, 28 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 20:09:58, 2 November 2024 for assistance on AfC submission by Esassaman

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Thank you for taking the time to review this article. I am just not understanding how to meet the "significant coverage" bar here. Johnny's works have been reviewed in quite a few online and paper magazines (https://johnnyrayjones.com/press). There are 37 links to verifyable reviews of his past three CD releases. They are all independant sources, though most of them are small publishers (blues magazines or blues music related websites). They are all secondardy and independant. Should I just link to that press page in the article as a reference? Or are those kinds of music reviews just not meeting the bar for "significant coverage"? It just seems odd that some of the musicians that played on his albums have very short wikipedia pages with no CDs of their own released, only "appeared on" credits, but not the main guy. I feel like I'm missing something or just did something wrong in the way I wrote the article, I'm not very experienced with wikipedia biography authoring.

Esassaman (talk) 20:09, 2 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello there,
The draft contains a total of 14 sources, and apart from Allmusic, none appear reliable by Wikipedia standards. The two Allmusic sources are merely listings without album reviews (excluding user-generated content). You may want to highlight the top three sources on the draft's talk page where the subject has received significant coverage for reviewers to consider before making a decision. Given the current state, it doesn't seem the subject meets WP:NSINGER or WP:GNG. However, I’ll leave it for fresh eyes if you choose to resubmit. Regards. Hitro talk 13:53, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Robertson draft

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Hi @HitroMilanese,

I'm sorry for not responding to your message on my talk page. Initially, the message does appear like a warning or an advice, and I didn't know it would result in moving the page to draft. In such cases, for example, you wrote "Did you observe that the subject is also the article’s author? Personally, I would have declined it and requested additional references. Please be mindful of your Schumacher's level velocity, as it may not be beneficial to the project. Regards", and I think that the question is somewhat off since I accessed all the sources. Personal thinking may not be the scope of the encyclopedia, and per AFC, we should try as much as possible to help new editors. Belive me, its rare to see new editors wrote write so well like that one. I loved the draft and did a WP:BEFORE (incase of AFD) before accepting, and subsequently tagging. I respect you so much and would always love to see more encouragement from you. If you still object the mainspace moving, then WP:AFD. Cheers! Safari ScribeEdits! Talk! 00:05, 4 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SafariScribe
Hello there,
Firstly, instead of involving a third party, if you had discussed it with me, we could have resolved the issue in a much better way. Redraftifying was not as wrong as it was made to appear. It is a part of an essay not a policy or guideline.
Secondly, Wikipedia:Before exclusively deals with AfDs. It is out of scope of my understanding why do people bring it in discussions outside at AfDs. There is Wikipedia:BURDEN which is part of the Wikipedia's core policy. The burden to demonstrate verifiability lies with the editor who adds or restores material. So when I questioned the sourcing, it was your responsibility to demonstrate notability and refute my claims because you restored the material—not mine to take it to AfD and waste the community's time, specially when we are dealing with AfC drafts. If what is written in the submission meets the notability guidelines, but the submission lacks references to evidence this, then the underlying issue is inadequate verification and the submission should be declined for that reason. You can not and should not bring Wikipedia:Before or Wikipedia:NEXIST while accepting or declining drafts. I might have been wrong in assessing the sources, but one of the reference from 7 was authored by the subject, one was Wikipedia:PRIMARY from ESSTS website. Unless, I have fixed the sourcing and demonstrated the notability clearly myself, I would not have accepted it. You might have different view which we could have discussed.
I know it is rare for new editors to write so well; at the same time, I am also aware of how well COI or paid editors write using disposable new accounts. I hope there is no disagreement on this fact.
I do understand that you are doing good for the project which is most important. At the end of the day, it is your overall work that matters not these small disputes. Have a wonderful day ahead. Regards. Hitro talk 08:14, 5 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]