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Your submission at Articles for creation: Careers Through Culinary Arts Program (C-CAP) (December 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ca was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Especially, remove the "Notable Alumni" section, which has no sources and is filled with buzzwords. Many promotional claims are not even sourced. It will likely be accepted once fixed.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Ca ^{talk to me!} 10:32, 15 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, KDuryea! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Ca ^{talk to me!} 10:32, 15 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ways to improve Tanya Steel

Hello, KDuryea,

Thank you for creating Tanya Steel.

I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

Some of the sources are promotional. This article has the hallmarks of a commissioned work to promote the subject.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, leave a comment here and begin it with {{Re|Kudpung}}. Remember to sign your reply with ~~~~. For broader editing help, please visit the Teahouse.

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Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 23:48, 24 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Kudpung:Thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback. I tried to link to sources that prove accuracy so I will review them and remove any that look too promotional.~~~~ KDuryea (talk) 04:18, 25 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Are COI disclosures placed on my personal page or the talk porting of any articles I write, or both? I'm just a little confused and don't want to make a mistake. KDuryea (talk) 22:56, 13 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@KDuryea: Place conflict of interest disclosures on the talk pages of the articles you write. Place the conflict of interest template in the header of the talk page. Use {{Connected contributor}} if you are not paid, or {{Connected contributor (paid)}} if you are being paid to edit Wikipedia. Note that if you are being paid to edit Wikipedia, you must follow Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure. Optionally, you may wish to note the conflicts of interest on your user page. Z. Patterson (talk) 23:02, 13 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much! Does the COI for a paid contributor the correct disclosure for all COI disclosures? In my case I am not a paid contributor but do have a connection to the subject. KDuryea (talk) 23:13, 13 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@KDuryea: You would use Template:Connected contributor at the top of Talk:Tanya Steel. You are not a paid contributor. Z. Patterson (talk) 23:35, 13 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Please understand that any or all of the unreferenced claims can be deleted by another editor. In some cases, the article may be deleted. Sources that establish notability must also be high quality, preferably to in-depth treatments in establish national press newspapers of record. Staff listings and fleeting mentions are not admissible. Please also fully disclose your COI according to WP:PCD all dsections.Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 04:36, 25 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Careers Through Culinary Arts Program (February 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Greenman was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

See WP:COI. The current declaration that you have been paid on behalf of "Name of your client" is insufficient.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Careers Through Culinary Arts Program and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Greenman (talk) 16:40, 23 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Careers Through Culinary Arts Program (March 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sophisticatedevening was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

No changes since last decline, please spend some time working to remove the promotional tone before resubmitting.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Careers Through Culinary Arts Program and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Sophisticatedevening ^(talk) 16:36, 11 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]