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Your submission at Articles for creation: Alexander Paul Burton (February 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Rambley was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Almost all of the content from Early Life to Personal Life and Volunteering is unsourced.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Rambley (talk) 14:36, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Fortis Medical Legal! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Rambley (talk) 14:36, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Your username

Welcome to Wikipedia. I noticed that your username, "Fortis Medical Legal", may not comply with our username policy. Please note that you may not use a username that represents the name of a company, group, organization, product, service, or website. Examples of usernames that are not allowed include "XYZ Company", "MyWidgetsUSA.com", and "Foobar Museum of Art". However, you are permitted to use a username that contains such a name if it identifies you individually (not your role), such as "Sara Smith at XYZ Company", "Mark at WidgetsUSA", or "FoobarFan87", but not "SEO Manager at XYZ Company".

Please also note that Wikipedia does not allow accounts to be shared by multiple people and that you may not advocate for or promote any company, group, organization, product, service, or website, regardless of your username. Please also read our paid editing policy and our conflict of interest guideline. If you are a single individual and are willing to contribute to Wikipedia in an unbiased manner, please request a change of username by completing the form at Special:GlobalRenameRequest, choosing a username that complies with our username policy. Alternatively, you can just create a new account and use that for editing. If you believe that your username does not violate our policy, please leave a note here explaining why. Thank you. 🔥YesI'mOnFire🔥^{(ContainThisEmber?)} 15:22, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Monfire, the account username should be changed. I requested to change it. It is a personal account but I used a corporate email. Many thanks for understanding. Peter. Fortis Medical Legal (talk) 23:26, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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64.137.133.211 (talk) 20:44, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

February 2025

Welcome to Wikipedia. Your account has been blocked from editing because your username gives the impression that the account represents a group, team, club, organization, company, product, department, or website. Your username is the principal reason for the block. You are welcome to continue editing after you have chosen a new username that complies with Wikipedia's username policy.

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Thank you. voorts (talk/contributions) 22:57, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

hi there,

This is my medical legal company name which is in my name under Canadian law, but I can change it to just Peter Lawriw Bahan

Thanks

Peter 2605:8D80:680:2CF:BB49:8525:27EE:AD5C (talk) 22:58, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

If you want to change your username, you must log in and follow the instructions above to request a new username. voorts (talk/contributions) 23:02, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Also hi Voortis, Fortis isn't compensated. If you read my initial statement, on the page I explained that we're doing lgbt outreach in Toronto and Ontario to help underrepresented individuals Fortis Medical Legal (talk) 23:08, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

If you're referring to this comment, Wikipedia is not a place to engage in advocacy on behalf of individuals or social groups, nor is it a place to promote your business' philanthropic efforts. Additionally, even if you are not being compensated, your writing at Draft:Alexander Paul Burton is very promotional. Wikipedia articles must be written in an impartial tone. voorts (talk/contributions) 23:17, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

im a private individual writing articles, I don't need a reason to write an article. I was adding it to help add context. It's not promotional and I'm not being paid. Fortis Medical Legal (talk) 23:21, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

i appreciate you're a volunteer and expert. In this case, please show me the parts which are promotional sounding and I'll be happy to edit them out. I added sources. Many thanks. Peter Fortis Medical Legal (talk) 23:22, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

All of these are statements of opinion, peacock prose, or not encyclopedic in tone. Wikipedia must be written according to a neutral point of view.

"a deeply emotional and unconventional approach"
"He fuses classical harmonies with modern electronic textures, creating immersive soundscapes where technique meets emotion."
"crafting his musical identity"
"deeply influenced"
"He is an active volunteer and philanthropist. He has donated to the Distress Centres of Greater Toronto and the Centre for Grief and Healing in Mississauga. He has also volunteered at the Allan Gardens Food Bank and participated in community initiatives at Little Trinity Church. In addition, he recently donated $1000 to help purchase pet food for marginalized clients at a local food bank."

voorts (talk/contributions) 23:28, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Voortis,

I appreciate the feedback. As well as this, I will search through and find similar language and have it removed.

Again, I appreciate your help and expertise. For all future additions I will pay heed to this.

Live long and prosper

(sorry I had to say it! Also a fan!) Fortis Medical Legal (talk) 23:30, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Peace and long life. voorts (talk/contributions) 23:31, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

This user's unblock request has been reviewed by an administrator, who accepted the request.

PeterLawriwBahan (block log • active blocks • global blocks • contribs • deleted contribs • filter log • creation log • change block settings • unblock • checkuser (log))

Request reason:

Peter Lawriw Bahan

Accept reason:

Given that this was a soft username block, I will unblock you. Please remember to use a neutral point of view as you edit. Also read Wikipedia's payment disclosure and conflict of interest policies and guidelines. Editing in a promotional manner and/or failure to comply with these policies and guidelines may result in you being reblocked, and the unblock process will be more challenging. Significa liberdade (she/her) (talk) 01:06, 22 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

new username.can.be just Peter Lawriw Bahan

Thanns Fortis Medical Legal (talk) 23:03, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks. To reiterate that there is no payment and it isn't a corporate initiative, just a personal one, I have changed my email from the FORTIS one to my own iCloud email. Thanks for understanding and apologies for the confusion - my bad!

Live long and Prosper! PeterLawriwBahan (talk) 02:25, 22 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@PeterLawriwBahan: Do you have a personal or professional relationship with Burton? If so, you are allowed to write about him (although you are discouraged from doing so), as noted in Wikipedia's conflict of interest guideline. Basically, if you want to write about friends, business partners, clients, etc., you must publicly declare that on Wikipedia and you must agree to proceed carefully; I appreciate that you've already taken my advice about article tone. Best, voorts (talk/contributions) 02:58, 22 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

thanks for your message and the helpful reminder about Wikipedia’s conflict of interest guidelines. I can confirm that I am known to Alexander Paul Burton within the community. As someone who works in law, I fully understand the responsibility of contributing to living biographies and the strictness of those guidelines. I’m happy to take full responsibility for anything shared and will proceed carefully to ensure accuracy and transparency. How can I go about declaring it? Thanks again for your advice! For future articles I create I am sure it will be much more smooth as I am understanding more aspects of editing. I appreciate your patience. PeterLawriwBahan (talk) 03:08, 22 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I have added a tag to the draft's talk page. You may also choose to declare it on your userpage using Template:User COI. voorts (talk/contributions) 03:30, 22 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

. Fortis Medical Legal (talk) 23:03, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alexander Paul Burton (February 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Voorts were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

A source is generally considered to be reliable if it has some clear editorial standards, including fact checking. For example, The New York Times or a scholarly journal article would be considered reliable. Some of the sources you cite are blogs and others appear to be press releases. Please note that biographies of living persons are held to a higher standard.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Alexander Paul Burton and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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voorts (talk/contributions) 02:33, 22 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Alexander Paul Burton has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Alexander Paul Burton. Thanks! voorts (talk/contributions) 02:50, 22 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alexander Paul Burton (February 22)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Alexander Paul Burton and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Theroadislong (talk) 09:00, 22 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]