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PrussianOwl “Tags must be accompanied by a comment on the article's talk page explaining the problem and beginning a discussion on how to fix it”, as detailed here Wikipedia:Template messages/Cleanup. Please give specific examples, from the article, of the issues you have tagged. Circa73 (talk) 23:11, 7 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Well, it's an optional thing especially if the tags are self-explanatory, right? I don't think there's a lit more I could add to the tags. Except {{cleanup}} of course. PrussianOwl (talk) 01:21, 8 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
PrussianOwl I am more than happy to improve this article in any way that it needs. However if you are not willing to pinpoint in the article; where neutrality needs work, which ideas are given undue weight or which content is written like an advertisement, then I will have to assume that you are tag bombing. Would you like to give thoughtful input about which words and info need work? If not, I will go ahead and remove your tags.Circa73 (talk) 15:27, 8 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Fair enough. Giving the page the once-over, I can see that the lede gives undue weight to this performer's identity, i.e. "queer", that the Work section reads a lot like an advertisement for them, and that the Selected Performances section comes off as somewhat promotional. Overall the article, by the content of its parts, is not neutral. PrussianOwl (talk) 19:14, 8 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]