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... that Sri Jumahaliah Hanifa was the first woman dean of the University of Indonesia law school? Source: Oppusunggu, Yu Un (1 January 2008). "In Memoriam Prof. Mr. Dr. Sudargo Gautama". Jurnal Hukum & Pembangunan.
The article is new enough and long enough and adequately sourced. I did not find any close paraphrasing. All but one source is in Indonesian and offline so AGF. The picture is okay and properly licensed. However, while a QPQ has been provided, it is an incomplete review (it only checked for interestingness and length but not all of the criteria, whether explicitly or implicitly). The article does not mention her date of death, but apparently the obituary does give a date in 2008? My Indonesian is very basic and rusty, and the Google Translate translation is ambiguous: was the 2008 date her date of death, or when they learned the news of her death? Finally, I'm not really that big of a fan of the hook: is there nothing else about her that can be said? If there are no other options, we can probably go with it, but I just want to know if you have any other options. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:44, 30 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Narutolovehinata5: Whew! Thank you for the very extensive and thorough review. I think I have to adress some of your points: regarding the QPQ, I've checked all references given, the shortness of the hook, and there aren't much to comment about other aspects of the article other than its interestingness and length. Regarding the obituary, it wasn't her obituary; it was another law professor's obituary. In the second-to-last page of the obituary, there is this statement: Sebagai seorang Guru Besar, Prof. Gautama memiliki sejumlah asisten. Di antara mereka adalah almh. Ny. S. J. Hanifah Wiknjosastro, S.H., yang menjadi dekan wanita pertama di FHUI periode 1978-1984 (As a Professor, Prof. Gautama had a number of assistants. Among them was the late Mrs. S. J. Hanifah Wiknjosastro, S.H., who became the first female dean at FHUI for the period 1978-1984.) Lastly, regarding the hook, I don't think there's any other options, since the article's size barely passes the DYK threshold. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael12:07, 30 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
For the QPQ review, please make the checks explicit in the nomination as a promoter or other editor could reject the QPQ as being insufficiently complete. I'm also not sure if the "- ?" thing in the lede is how we treat people with known dates of birth but no known dates of death, so I found that weird. If that's standard practice then I'll let it slide, and it's not really a DYK issue anyway. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:33, 1 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Narutolovehinata5: Hi uhh forgot to follow up on this. The Eeringia DYK has appeared on the mainpage a week ago with all issues fixed. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael
Apologies for the delay. To be honest, I held back on approving this because I was confused with the statement above regarding Eeringia's running and I wasn't sure how that was related to this. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 22:48, 19 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I see. I'm still not sure how to treat the lead though given that we have a known date of birth but not a date of death: asking RoySmith if he has any ideas. That is my last remaining concern so once that's resolved this nomination will be approved. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:38, 21 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Being the first woman dean of the law school seems like a non-controversial statement. According to Faculty of Law, University of Indonesia, the law school was founded in 1909, so when she was appointed dean in 1978, the school was 70 years old, so probably they'd just had a handful of deans by that time so it's not hard to figure out which one was the first woman. I would, however, change the hook to say "first woman dean" instead of the somewhat ambiguous "first woman to head". What does it mean to be the "head"? Dean? Chair of the department? Provost? Just go with what the source says and avoid all that. RoySmith(talk)13:39, 21 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@RoySmith: Actually, that wasn't my concern. My concern was how to treat the lead considering she is deceased but we only know her date of birth and not her date of death. Seeing "Sri Jumahaliah Hanifa Wiknyosastro (born 7 November 1924) was" feels weird to me and I'm not sure if this is the standard way of introducing deceased figures who have a known birth date but not a death date. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 15:10, 21 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
If she was reported dead, that should be added with a ref, and the date of the report (as we often say "baptised if we known that date but not the dob, see Beethoven). If there was no report, we should not speculate but leave as is.) --12:52, 24 May 2025 (UTC)Gerda Arendt (talk)
@Narutolovehinata5: I dont feel that the lack of an explicit death date should have been reason for stalling the nom more. a simple wording addition of (born 7 November 1924 - death date unknown(citation)) will fix that, and lacking a birth or death date is a frequent situation.--Kevmin§19:12, 29 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Apologies for that: I was never planning to stall the nomination for as long as it did, I had just been waiting for a response to my concern and one did not come immediately. The nomination can be approved if the status quo is not an issue. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 05:30, 30 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
In the interest of this nomination moving forward, since it is already over two months old, I will be approving this as I do not think the lede issue is a problem for DYK. Whatever happens with that issue can be discussed outside DYK. I have also modified the hook per the above statement. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:04, 2 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
... that África Brasil was recorded with two drummers, two bassists, and many musicians that the producer had to take a crash program in the United States to learn how to record it?
Source: https://revistacontinente.com.br/secoes/resenha/africa-brasil-1 "O produtor afirmou que ninguém queria encarar a missão de gravar um disco com duas baterias, dois contrabaixos e mais um monte de músicos. Mazzola foi, então, fazer um curso de especialização nos Estados Unidos e pediu para Jorge esperar sua volta ao Brasil e a importação de uma mesa de 16 canais. Acabou cumprindo, também, o papel de técnico de som, pois o profissional designado não conseguia dar conta do novo equipamento."
Article expanded 5x within a week of nomination. QPQ good. Article is well-written and well-sourced, hook is interesting. Two things with the hook, though: it seems as if the hook should say "so many musicians", and the source and article seem to indicate "specialized course" rather than a crash course, as linked.~Darth StabroTalk • Contribs03:24, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Darth Stabro: Thanks for the review and sorry for the late response. I prefer not to use "so many musicians", since the emphasis is more on the unusual configuration (two drummers, two bassists, and others) than on quantity. Though I agree that "specialized course" could more match the source, I was wondering if it might be a little unclear to general readers. Would "recording course" or "technical course" work better for clarity while still staying true to the source? Cattos💭19:20, 25 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Butting in to agree with Darth Stabro here; as written the grammar is off. If you want to keep away from the "so many" phrasing, you'll need to revise it. ♠PMC♠ (talk)22:53, 29 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
My suggested grammatical improvement: "that as África Brasil was recorded with two drummers, two bassists, and many musicians the producer had to take a crash program in the United States to learn how to record it?" (taking out that)User:D Kirlston - talk00:07, 14 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Z1720: this still wouldn't satisfy the wording about a "crash program". @Cathodography: thoughts on this:
ALT1 ... that as África Brasil was recorded with two drummers, two bassists, and many other musicians, the producer had to take a specialized recording course in the United States to learn how to mix it?
ALT1: ... that the Dexcom Seven, launched in 2007, was the first CGM system capable of delivering continuous glucose data for a full seven days, doubling the lifespan of its predecessor?
Source: https://pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/articles/PMC8120065/ "...the STS-7, which was the first device to allow patients to continuously monitor their glucose levels for seven days as opposed to three."
ALT2: ... that Dexcom aired its first-ever Super Bowl ad in 2023, featuring Nick Jonas, who lives with type 1 diabetes and uses the Dexcom G7 CGM?
ALT3: ... that the Dexcom Follow app enables up to ten designated users—like parents or caregivers—to remotely monitor a person’s real-time glucose readings on their mobile devices?
Overall: So far so good, article passed minimum length criterion and newness. Source spot checks indicate good results, though I don't think every product name needs to be bolded? I would AGF on the interpretation that "first real-time factory-calibrated CGM system" means "without requiring calibrations". I also endorse the ALT0 hook, though I think it would be much more compact if you end the hook at "...calibrations" (no need for the "thereby eliminating the need for regular fingerstick blood tests?"). Approved! Regards, Jeromi Mikhael04:32, 29 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
On second thought, I might have trimmed this a bit too much, at the expense of meaning anything to someone unfamiliar with the subject matter. Perhaps a mention or link to type 1 diabetes should find its way back into the hook somewhere. jlwoodwa (talk) 03:12, 10 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Overall, the article is new enough (created on 8 April), is long enough, is NPOV, hook is cited to a RS and QPQ is done. Earwig shows a "violation unlikely" result with 2.0% similarity. Interesting article/subject and one that I would've thought would have been covered on Wikipedia a long time ago already. Cattos💭01:14, 10 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Is there any remedy here other than to wait out the potentially months it will take for this merge discussion to be resolved? It's been open for a few weeks now and discussion has been pretty limited. Morgan695 (talk) 17:13, 20 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
... that by its own count, Royalty Pharma owns partial rights to 7 of the top 30 selling drugs in the United States?
Source: "Cashing in on rising drug prices often unleashes an outcry from consumers and politicians. But a little-known private equity investor, Royalty Pharma, has built an unusual investment portfolio valued at $15 billion — it buys up the rights to royalties on future drug sales — while largely avoiding public controversy. By its own count, Royalty Pharma owns partial rights to seven of the 30 top-selling drugs in the United States, including giants like Humira, the arthritis treatment that is the single biggest-selling medication in America. And its deals have been getting larger." NY Times
QPQ done, article seems long enough and decently sourced, no copyvio concerns. However, per the original source and your excerpt, the claim is specifically By its own count, Royalty Pharma owns partial rights to seven of the 30 top-selling drugs in the United States (emphasis mine). Also, change "seven" to "7" for consistency per MOS:NUM. Change these here and in the article and I'll finish this review. Departure– (talk) 19:36, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Thriley: Sorry for not getting to this sooner, I didn't get your ping. I'll take a second look at this tomorrow and more than likely support. Cheers! Departure– (talk) 02:17, 17 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Approved on all criteria (I've been busy with things on- and off-wiki, so sorry for the long wait time!), no copyvio and viable as moved to mainspace within a week of this nomination. Good to go!Departure– (talk) 13:31, 21 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Thriley: Actually, I'm going to scrutinize this a bit more. The hook itself is lifted directly out of the source. Do you have a fair rephrasing of it so the DYK hook itself isn't a copyvio concern? Departure– (talk) 13:37, 21 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"The payout is believed to be the largest financial return ever achieved for a charitable organization pursuing treatments for disease and is likely to encourage other patient advocacy groups to seek their own deals with pharmaceutical companies; a growing number are already doing so." [1]Thriley (talk) 18:26, 2 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Thriley: Going to object to that one for two reasons. First, the source qualifies the claim with "it is believed" while both the hook and the article present it as fact. Second, even if that was certain when this article came out, it's been over a decade since this article and the information may not be true today. Do you have another hook? There's about 11 days to timeout, fyi. Departure– (talk) 18:37, 2 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: This is a first for me at DYK. I created this page as part of my disclosed paid editing work for ASU (User:Melted Brie). For DYK purposes, I am crediting my normal account as the sole author as I'm not doing DYK at ASU's direction and to streamline DYK credits.
Moved to mainspace by Sammi Brie (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 757 past nominations.
It feels like a violation of the spirit of Wikipedia. If this is allowed, then all properly disclosed paid editors could use the front page to promote whatever they wanted. Thriley (talk) 21:29, 11 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
For what it's worth, there's no blanket ban against DYK nominations where COI is involved. Things are treated on a case-by-case basis, rather than there being hard rules against it. We did have that issue with TonyTheTiger and his sister a while back, and that nomination was ultimately rejected, but again that nomination was discussed largely on its merits and not solely for being a COI. In this particular case, while Sammi did write the article on the direction of ASU, her nominating the article was done independently and was not a request by ASU. If it had been the latter, then perhaps this nomination would be inappropriate, but in this case, it's just an article she nominated that just happened to be one she made as part of her paid editing work, rather than her being paid to nominate it for DYK. I kinda doubt her ASU superiors even know what DYK is (please correct me if I'm wrong Sammi). Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 06:38, 14 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
There needs to be a community discussion on disclosed paid editors and DYK. I think it would be best to have a complete ban of paid articles on DYK rather than evaluating them on a case by case basis. Brie is an exceptional editor with a long history. To make an exception for her but not other paid editors opens up too many potential time consuming discussions that would be avoided with a simple ban. Thriley (talk) 15:56, 15 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Just to add to this discussion, I've had nominations go through DYK whilst working as a Wikimedian in residence, and I think as long as it is disclosed there shouldn't be an issue. The nominations I put through were part of projects with cultural heritage organisations (which I think as a community we want to encourage their support in general) and the hits from a DYK can be really helpful to demonstrate the impact that engaging appropriately with Wikimedia can have. I think clarification would be good, but I don't think it is outside the spirit of DYK. Lajmmoore (talk) 06:17, 29 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
WP:QPQ not done (or not linked above), stalled till then, may be quick failed if not completed soon.
Note: I will most probably not be able to review this after QPQ is submitted as I just came across while patrolling. Others can definitely take over this review. ~/Bunnypranav:<ping>11:58, 12 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: - @Sammi Brie: I've found many instances of repeating the same reference. Starting at the beginning of the article, I've made a few edits to the citations using "name=" in the ref tags. There are quite a few more in the article. It is challenging to assess the balance of citations with each instance being separate. Please see WP:REFNAME. - — ERcheck (talk) 01:23, 24 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Source: https://www.sfchronicle.com/politics/article/propk-great-highway-sf-19895246.php (A ballot measure to close a 2-mile stretch of San Francisco’s Great Highway passed with 54% of the vote in returns released Saturday afternoon. The controversial proposal, known as Proposition K, will ban vehicles on the city’s westernmost coastal boulevard between Lincoln Way and Sloat Boulevard.)
ALT1: ... that San Francisco's newest park is located on an oceanfront road that is now permanently closed to cars? Source: https://sfrecpark.org/1555/Sunset-Dunes (In April 2020, the Great Highway was closed to vehicles from Lincoln to Sloat to provide recreational opportunities and social distancing space during the COVID-19 pandemic. In August 2021, the Great Highway reopened to vehicular traffic on weekdays while retaining the weekend park usage. In December 2022, the Board of Supervisors passed legislation establishing the Great Highway Pilot, a hybrid usage plan that closed the road to vehicles on holidays and weekends and, during which, traffic and visitor data was collected on the Great Highway’s use as both a roadway and park. In November 2024, San Francisco voters approved the passage of Proposition K, which transforms the Upper Great Highway to a permanent 24/7 recreational public park for walking, biking, rolling and more.)
New: Okay: Article was created 9 April 2025, nominated 16 April.
Hook: Fairly interesting: in USA it is rare to replace a road with a park; and this particular park location is very noteworthy. Primary hook is superior to Alt2 hook, in my judgement.
Hook length is under 200 characters
Verifiable: All important facts in article have citations. I did a spot check of about half the cites, and they are valid.
Size: tool shows size is 2910 B (476 words) ... which meets the DYK requirements, I believe.
Source for hook: Yes, a source is provided, and I looked at it.
Plagiarism - I ran the Earwig copyvio tool and max % was 16%, which is within tolerances.
POV: Article is neutral and factual.
Images: article has one image, and it contains appropriate free use justification.
Quid Pro Quo - Nominator says they have NOT done it yet; Cannot approve DYK until that is completed.
Source: "MARVA NABILI, an immigrant film maker from Iran, has written and directed Nightsongs, a fictional portrait of Chinese immigrants in New York. Having spent several years living near and even working in Chinatown, she has compiled a haunting biography of outsiders trying to survive in a new environment. The slice-of-life details are depicted with the immediacy of a documentary using a hidden camera. Being presented as part of public television's American Playhouse series,"
One suggestion on the hook is to clarify which Chinatown ie "...the struggles of a family in New York's Chinatown." I know it's possible to hover over the link and identify which one it is but I think the additional specificity helps create curiosity. EEHalli (talk) 14:01, 24 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Overall: Article is new enough and long enough, is sourced, neutral and plagiarism free. However the lead needs expanding, and I was confused by this sentence "In 1977, at the age of 36, Nabili became the second female director to make a feature film in Iran after Shala Riari's Marjan in 1956, a public failure at the time, of which no trace remains." - it seems to contradict the earlier paragraph about her return in 1975, nor does it specifiy the film. If its the Sealed Soil, then it need integrating into the paragraph on that topic and the chronology of production clarifying. Lajmmoore (talk) 19:24, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: @GeogSage: I'm seeing a lot of good, potential hooks in the article. Your section on "Early history and etymology" has quite a few. The material about Eratosthenes, the Ptolemaic tradition, and Islamic geographers could make separate hooks or could even be combined into one hook. Viriditas (talk) 01:43, 28 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Viriditas:: Thanks for the feedback. This is my first attempt, and I've been trying to think of good ways to respond. Would I put a new one in the comments here, or edit the proposal? GeogSage (⚔Chat?⚔) 02:20, 30 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@GeogSage: You can shorten it much more, and others will ask you to do so. "... that while technical geography studies the applications of GIS and remote sensing today, it has origins in Ptolemaic and Islamic cartography?" That's 141 instead of 197 characters. Viriditas (talk) 22:46, 20 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@GeogSage: I realize this is your first time at DYK. The process is fairly simple and transparent. The hooks should be easy to find in the article and the sources should easily replicate and support the info. These two things are difficult to determine for all three of your hooks. Sometimes, editors who are faced with this issue will simply kludge the hooks into the article with a cited source. You may find this the easiest option. For the reviewer, we like to see how the sources support the hooks in a fairly overt way. I don't see the exact hooks in your current article (I see parts of them here and there), and it isn't easy to determine if the sources support them. If the simple method I've described up above to kludge the hooks doesn't work for you, you can easily implement a second solution: write a new hook from the source directly and add it to the article, showing how the source directly supports it with a quote. Any way you do it, just remember the process should be fairly transparent for the reviewer so we can easily check the hook and the source. Viriditas (talk) 01:17, 21 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Overall: Article is new (GA) and long enough at the time of nomination. Earwig report looks good. ALT2 is interesting. The "see also" borders on the absurd, so I think there is a fundamental misunderstanding as to how we use this section. Most of these entries should be deleted. Lead section may be satisfactory for DYK, but as a recent GAN, it should be rewritten to summarize the main points of the article, which at the moment, it does not do. Use of excessively long captions also deviates from best practices. Formatting of book titles, such as Cave 1749, require italics. The date is also wrong. The book was first published a decade earlier; 1749 refers to the second edition. You don't have to type out the entire 18th century title; Geography Reformed (1739) will do as a shortened title. Remove the stray comma from "1749,". The SAGE Handbook of Historical Geography says it was anonymously authored but published by Cave. Presentation is slightly hampered by textual issues with sentences such as "These frameworks were mostly advanced mostly by human geographers..." Also, "While when the term technical geography first entered the English lexicon..." Use of quotations of common words and phrases in the "Early history and etymology" section should be replaced with paraphrasing. Book titles like Geographia and Kitab al-Buldan use italics. You write "Geography has a history spanning cultures and thousands of years and is described as a "mother science" from which more specialized disciplines emerge..." I would want to see a quote from the source on that, as it sounds incredibly unusual. Philosophy and physics are most often described as the "mother science", not geography. Perhaps something was lost in translation here as it doesn't make sense. Copyedits needed. The section on "Quantitative revolution" is an example of WP:CITEKILL. You don't need or require six citations for two sentences. You can bundle citations or use footnotes if needed. One citation per sentence is generally recommened, two if needed. Update: I went ahead and made a series of copyedits.[2] My main concern right now concerns 1) the lead section, which does not properly summarize the article or its main points, but I think DYK allows for that, so it is not an issue that has any bearing on the success of this nomination, but it does personally bother me, and I wanted to express my concerns because there will be readers who will come here to learn more and will be turned away by the lead; I know I was. Please rewrite the lead to summarize the entirety of the subject you've presented, highlighting the most significant points. 2) I like ALT2, but I'm having great difficulty verifying it based on your citations (and it doesn't appear in whole in the article, just in parts). @GeogSage: Why don't you make this as easy as possible and mine Geographia Technica[3] for a good hook and add it to this article? I see an interesting one about how technical geography was used during the COVID-19 pandemic to analyze NO2 concentrations, showing that pandemic restrictions led to emissions reductions.[4] Alternatively, I see another good hook that is already in the article, but needs some work. The information about the Michigan-Wisconsin boundary Supreme Court case would make a good hook, but you will need to return to the source to flesh it out as it isn't all that clear. I combined ALT0 and ALT1 together to get ALT3, and added the cartography bit from the "Fundamentals" section, where ALT3 appears, but shortened the entire thing. Viriditas (talk) 23:43, 24 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@GeogSage: This potential hook (which already appears in the "Fundamentals" section and elsewhere) could be vastly improved by adding additional features like forecasting and predicting future events and tracking diseases, but none of that appears in your current version. I'm tapping out now, because I created ALT3 based on the only sources I could find that support each other independently, with Haidu 2016 describing Ormeling 2009, which makes it verifiable and secondary in nature based on the primary. I originally wanted to add a hook about Geography Reformed, but I only found primary sources, with no referential secondary. Generally, with DYK, you want a hook that is supported by a source like Haidu 2016 referring to Ormeling 2009, and that's something you want to aim for so there's a layer of separation between the original statement and the source referring to the original statement. That helps avoid original research which is why I didn't submit the hook about Cave 1739, even though I liked that one. I will leave the final determination to others. Viriditas (talk) 23:43, 24 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, you have now done so. GA, AGF on hook fact/ref (the hook is virtually a quote from the article). The hook is not very clear, but nor is the article, frankly. No qpq needed. The pic is ok, if rather tall, but the caption waaaay too long! You won't get more than say "Iblis (right) guards the Divine Garden. Johnbod (talk) 01:48, 17 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Johnbod, this doesn't really strike me as a "yes". I agree the hook is unclear to the average reader. I think a clearer one should be promoted, and the image is not clear at displayed size. ꧁Zanahary꧂05:04, 18 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It was a yes, but a clearer/snappier hook might be better. I don't feel qualified to suggest one, but as always, anyone else may do so. I can probably understand it better than many of our readers as I know what the Upanishads are, and who Dara Shikoh was. Johnbod (talk) 03:16, 19 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure either. It passed review as far as I'm concerned. Perhaps one of those who like fiddling with hooks at the last minute will find a better hook after promotion. Zanahary? Johnbod (talk) 16:11, 3 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Just noting that the image is poor at thumb size, which is disappointing as it's a nice image overall and of a different art style than usually featured. If it's possible to isolate Iblis with a crop, that may make it clearer i.e. usable. Kingsif (talk) 01:06, 11 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I could upload an isolated variant for the DYK, as I did with the blue angel on the mosaic in Sant'Apollinare Nuovo, Ravenna, in Devil in Christianity. Maybe give me time until weekend. I have not seen your request until now by the way. I apologize for that.
VenusFeuerFalle I'd like to double-check the hook fact. Could you send me a copy of the appropriate page from Barry 2004? I can get it on inter-library loan, but it would probably be a lot faster if you could send me a scan. Thanks. RoySmith(talk)17:42, 11 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Sure. I have been back to the library yesterday to take a photo of the page. Would you mind telling me how I sent it to you? RoySmith
Since I would like to reach a closure with this article, I would simply leave a quote for the relevant passage:
"The devil's defective spiritual vision is transcribed in medieval Islamic literature and art by various obvious symbols. Because he may only perceive and therefore only reflect God's transcendent aspect of wrath, and never God's immanent aspect of love, Satan is therefore nicknamed al-A'mash, the bleray-eyed or goggled-eyed (as he appears in Sultan-Muhammad's sixteenth century paintings), or he is called al-A'war, the blind in one eye (the distinctive attribute of the demon Dajjal the Antichrist, who thereby dooms to the same fate such as unwitting followers as the three damned "Calandar" princes in the 1001 Nights). Mystical treatises like Mahmud-i Shabistar's famous fourteenth-century manual of Sufism, the Gulshan-i Raz (Rose Bower of Mystery"), list whole series of various heresies or errorneous theological stands whose defenders are depicted as Satan's brood, and so variously described as one-eyed, bleary-eyed, too near-sighted, too far-sighted, or blind. Satan represents his own opague mental state in God's universe. But the devil is part of God's universe, not other. There is no reality other than God. Here is where Islam's relentless monotheistic drive, under the pends of such spiritual masters as al-Hallaj, 'Ayn-ul-Quzat, Sana'i, Rozbihan, 'Attar, Ibn 'Arabi, Rumi, and Jami independently carried Muslim mystical speculation to dizzy conceptual heights akin to the most rarefied summits of ndian cosmological thought. (...) Satan, unknowingly, therefore serves as God's mask. He is himself the veil (iltibas) which the Godhead weaves, as Rozbihan's glosses to al-Hallaj explain, and wherein the Godhead chooses to hide from all those unworthy to perceive the divine therein. That is, the cosmic veil is the visible universe itself, which reveals God's presence to those who known, but conceals God's presence from those who do not know. In this sense, iltibas [the veil], in Sufi speculation, may be regarded as virtually a symbolic equivalent to the traditional Indian concept of maya, the "veil of cosmic illusion." Such philosophical equivelance between Sufism and Hinduism came in fact to be perceived by a few scholars of both faiths when Sufism and Hinduism met on Indian soul, and enlightened thingers familiar with both traditions, like the seventeenth-century Mughal prince Dara Shikoh, sought to reconcile the essence of Ibn 'Arabi's teachings with the Upanishads. Indeed, Sufis's diabolic "Cloake One" also serves, like the maya which protects the secret nature of Indian divinities from the eyes of the profane, a positive cosmic function: the devil becomes God's warden, as it were, a ferocious temple guard or "keeper of the cutrain" who bars access by the unworthy unto the Godhead."
Since it is almost a month old by now, and a thing supposed to be done within not more than 2 weeks, can someone just accept it by now? If still after 2 weeks none of the objectors replied, the objection cannot be that strong. And double check should still be possible as the quote has been made accessable for everyone here.VenusFeuerFalle (talk) 11:57, 27 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
No, I still object. The hook is long-winded and makes no sense to someone unfamiliar with Upanishads, which is a lot of people. ꧁Zanahary꧂18:33, 28 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That's asking too much from a 200-char hook, really. If you can't suggest a better hook (and nobody has so far), time to let go. Johnbod (talk) 01:13, 29 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Broad comprehensibility is too much to ask of a DYK hook? The hook is incomprehensible, the image is unreadable, and the article is full of prose like If angels can sin or not is disputed in Islam. Those who say that Iblis was not an angel, but a jinni, argue that only jinn (and humans), but not angels are capable of disobedience… This view is also found to be prominent among many Salafis. The Sunni school holds on to the doctrine of predestination, al-Razi being an exception, and asserts that…. The article consistently uses Iblis' instead of Iblis's, which is ungrammatical. How about this article be subjected to the thorough copyedit and review that it should have received when it passed GA, and then someone can write a coherent hook? If not, then the nominator can let go.꧁Zanahary꧂05:31, 29 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It seems your objection is much more than just the DYK nomination then. I wonder why you did not mention anything during the GA review, it took long enough. And it would also be helpful to adress your true concerns earlier rather than waiting almost a month after you raised entirely different objection. This is everything but constructive. But okay, let's put that aside and let's aderss your concerns: Regarding the spelling, both variations are fine: https://www.grammarbook.com/blog/apostrophes/apostrophes-with-words-ending-in-s/ If the source is mistaken, feel free to enlighten us or fix it yourself. It shouldn't take longer than 5 minutes. Now regarding the hook: I do not see how it is incomprehensible. If you know neither Sufism, nor Iblis, nor the Upanishads, maybe it is a great moment to click on the highlighted bright blue Wiki-Links? The article is not about an American subject afterall, so being introduced to something new is unavoidable at this point. If you have a better suggestion, as stated previously, feel free to make a suggestion, be constructive! Because as it is now, the hook does qualify as a hook: It is interesting, something new to learn, offers information the reader probably did not know, etc. ZanaharyVenusFeuerFalle (talk) 12:58, 29 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I didn’t take part in the review. The article is full of truly poor prose, and it shouldn’t be on the front page until it’s copyedited. I think my position—that the article is unsuitable for featuring and that its proposed hook is poor—is clear now.꧁Zanahary꧂21:18, 29 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
If you think the article has serious issues, you should propose a Good article Nominee reassessment. I doubt you will bring it through, as three independent Users had a look at this article, without any mjaor objections. However, this is the DYK nomination, not the GA accessment. And apart from your personal distaste for the article, you are left to explain properly, because it is everything but clear what you mean, you have not contributed anything constructive yet. I do not want to be rude, but I am currently inclined to disregard your opinion on this entirely (WP:WHATISCONSENSUS), as you bring nothing to the table but vague criticism and advises which even contradict grammar rules. Please clarify specifically what your concerns are or I suggest to proceed with the review.Zanahary As you Johnbod have been the reviewer, I would like to invite you to share your current opinion on the DYN. As far as I understood, you were fine with the hook as it is now. The objection raised by Zanahary about the picture has been adressed as well.
Comment, I don't think any of the proposed ALTs are interesting enough - the first two basically say DYK that a song was popular, and the third isn't about the song, but the singer. Any alternatives? Eddie891TalkWork10:11, 25 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
To me, this hook has a similar problem of interest- What is interesting about the fact that a singer performed one of their songs at a concert? Eddie891TalkWork06:31, 26 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Royiswariii: Long enough, new enough. None of the first four hooks meet WP:DYKHOOKSTYLE and upon further inspection my ALT4 doesn't check out either (refs 19 and 20 do not explicitly say that they are the final issues). I can call for another reviewer on ALT4a: ... that "Dilaw" topped the first two weeks of two singles charts? or you can propose me a hook about its parody.--Launchballer11:28, 31 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
This is not explained, but a "freshman team" seems to be a different team from the actual team competing in actual competitions that count. Varsity team doesn't explain this that well; the junior varsity term is explained extensively there but there seems to be subtle difference. It seems to be a kind of a reserve team. Howard the Duck (talk) 22:17, 10 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Correct, its a type of reserve team. Can you think of a better way to word it in the hook? Perhaps "reserve team" rather than "freshman team"? BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:04, 10 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'd rather link to "Freshman team" to Varsity team#North America, then change "varsity team" in the end to "football team" or even "varsity team". Adding "football" adds another can of worms on referring to what kind of "football" this is (LOL). Understanding this term is key in understanding the hook, and reserve team is mostly in the European POV where a team has a "second team" where it can tap players in cases of injury. This seems to be different as college football programs, while may have other teams, are not allowed to get players from those teams due to scholarship rules. The reader may have an idea where this guy started from the bottom and worked his way up. ALT1 doesn't really mean anything if you do not know who Don Hutson is.
Overall: As discussed earlier, the hook and article checks out, but non-American readers may not understand what "freshman team" means. I have suggested some options in regards to this earlier. If other reviewers disapprove of the original hook, ALT1 may be used, which also has the same problems (non-Americans may not understand it), but most people should get it (an upcoming player saw a veteran player, understood that the other guy was much better). Rest of the article checks out. Only thing holding out is my earlier suggestion on linking to Varsity team#North America. Howard the Duck (talk) 11:02, 27 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Source: Times obituary subhead reads "Indomitable spirit who with the backing of Dame Sybil Thorndike became the first woman to build a new theatre in Britain." https://archive.is/JgL6t
Overall: Article is new, long enough, and well sourced. WP:DAILYMIRROR is no consensus for reliability, but an uncontroversial article from 1969 seems safe enough. The hook is an exceptional claim but it seems to be well supported by reliable sources, and it is interesting. qpq is not required because the nominator has less than 5 previous noms. BuySomeApples (talk) 10:26, 26 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Hmm, it's well-sourced in the article, The Times put this fact as their subheadline. So it seems like either reliable sources got it wrong or Fram did. Not sure what the best course of action here is. —Ganesha811 (talk) 16:45, 21 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps rephrasing as "...that actor manager Hazel Vincent Wallace became the first woman to build a postwar theatre in Britain?" The adjective postwar qualifies it (and works quite nicely with the uncompromisingly Brutalist design of the Thorndike).EEHalli (talk) 17:34, 21 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That sucks, there's a lot of reliable sources reporting it but it clearly isn't true. The article should be edited to fix that too now. The rephrased hook sounds a little WP:SYNTHy. Is there any other hook we can use? BuySomeApples (talk) 05:14, 22 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Not a review, but the hook as currently written may not meet WP:DYKINT as being interesting to a broad, non-specialist audience. @Deiademian: Can you please propose additional hooks that would be more familiar to general readers either unfamiliar with or only have a basic understanding of Greek mythology? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 06:03, 19 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Two points (not directed at the latter alternative in particular, but the overall wording in both): if I'm understanding the article correctly, the number of extant pieces seems not to be exactly sixty (the surviving fragments, which number about sixty), and I think it's worth considering that "in sixty pieces" could sound as though those sixty pieces constitute the complete relief. The latter would likely be remedied by the presence of the image (if it's used), though arguably one shouldn't need the image to avoid ambiguity. – Michael Aurel (talk) 14:54, 21 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Seeing as there hasn't been any activity here since my last comment, I'll add that I think Deiadameian's first hook was the more interesting one. It was just worded in such a manner that it wasn't comprehensible to the average reader. How about something along the lines of "... that the Lacrateides Relief depicts gods from an ancient initiation cult?" – Michael Aurel (talk) 07:54, 8 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Overall: Deiadameian I have tagged four things on in the article that require attribution. A QPQ is not needed. The picture isn't clear at a small size. SL93 (talk) 07:24, 27 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Unfortunately most other pictures available are not clear enough at 100px, except maybe this one which is probably the best alternative. As for the hook, since it was agreed to be changed to another contributor's suggestion ("... that the Lacrateides Relief depicts gods from an ancient initiation cult?"), does the initial nom need to be rewritten? Deiadameian (talk) 09:15, 27 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
But on the other hand, I review oldest first, so it's this or something 5,000 words bigger, so I carried it out myself. This would still deserve {{lead too short}} but that's not a DYK issue. This is long enough and new enough. Earwig is clean. Your QPQ is sorely lacking in specifics, although as it seems to have gone through without a hitch I'll accept it. I don't consider ALT0 interesting (it's always going to be named after something) and ALT1 doesn't quite check out (it may have reduced imports but I don't see where either source says it was developed for that reason). I can suggest ALT2: ... that one police force tested the Trichy assault rifle in mud, rain, and saltwater before ordering? but I'd need to request another reviewer and I'll hear other suggestions.--Launchballer12:35, 31 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Shame though... and I thought at least ALT0 would work. I have no problem doing an alternate ALT. Though wondering if there's edits that need to be done, @Launchballer:. Ominae (talk) 11:59, 2 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Source: Video source "Eu fiz todos os retratos do Arnaldo, Brown e da Marisa com cordas, antes. Era para ser uma capa completamente diferente. Eram com cordas de cavaquinho [...] Era todo um desenho baseado em dobrar cordas de aço." --> "I made all the portraits of Arnaldo, Brown, and Marisa with strings, before. It was supposed to be a completely different cover. They were with cavaquinho strings [...] It was all a design based on folding steel strings."
The current wording seems to be a bit off since it seems to focus more on Muniz than the chocolate syrup aspect. How do the following rewords sound?
ALT0a ... that Vik Muniz used chocolate syrup to illustrate the cover for Brazilian supergroup Tribalistas' debut album after musical strings did not work?
ALT0b ... that the cover for Brazilian supergroup Tribalistas' debut album used chocolate syrup to illustrate the trio after an earlier attempt with musical strings did not work?
ALT0c ... that the cover for Brazilian supergroup Tribalistas' debut album used chocolate syrup to illustrate the trio?
Admittedly, the first two new options are slightly longer than the original, but they're more intended to put more focus on the chocolate syrup fact than Muniz. Of course, if you prefer the original wording then that's fine. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 06:09, 19 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Cathodography: How does ALT0c sound then? Another issue I had with the original wording is that it wasn't clear what "trio" referred to (it's supposed to refer to the Tribalistas, but the hook did not make it clear that "Tribalistas" was also the name of the group). Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:29, 20 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
To be honest, I don't think substituting "trio" with either "members" or "artists" solves the issue because, ultimately, the problem is that ALT0 does not make it clear that Tribalistas is the name of both the album and the group. With regards to linking to linking to the group itself in ALT0b/ALT0c, there's really no need per WP:SEAOFBLUE. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 03:56, 21 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
... that European broadcasters waived their rights to Brave Bunnies so that the children's series could be streamed ad-free in Ukrainian for refugees?
Source: Marian McHugh, Broadcast "Go Jetters helps launch Ukrainian-language YouTube channel", 16 June 2022, ProQuest2677615627. Quote: "A YouTube channel dedicated to entertaining Ukrainian children displaced by the war is to launch on 1 July [2022] ... offer pre-school and primary school-aged refugee children across the UK and Europe entertainment in their own language and will also house shows from Ukrainian producers, including Brave Bunnies ... The ad-free YouTube channel ... Everyone involved has given up their time and rights to their content for nothing ... It really shows that the creative industries can be a force for good." Also Connie Evans, The Herald (Glasgow) "YouTube's channel for Ukraine", 17 June 2022, ProQuest2677284195. Quote: "A non-profit YouTube channel created specifically for Ukrainian children displaced by the war is set to launch ... shows by Ukrainian producers with titles such as Brave Bunnies".
ALT1: ... that weeks after production of Brave Bunnies was suspended due to the Russian invasion of Ukraine, its production coordinator had become a war correspondent? Source: Natalia Yermak, New York Times "A Cartoon Producer Turned War Reporter: Times Insider", 1 June 2022, ProQuest2671841726. Quote: "the day before the Russian invasion began. I was working as a production coordinator at a company that produced a Ukrainian cartoon series for children called "Brave Bunnies." ... The “Brave Bunnies” team decided to put production on hold ... I started collecting and documenting stories as a form of volunteerism; I wanted to help share information about the war. Colleagues and friends connected me with various news media outlets. Soon, I was presented with an opportunity to work with The New York Times. ... About a month after my unexpected last day at "Brave Bunnies," I became a member of a team"
@Launchballer: Thanks for reopening this! @SounderBruce and Gatoclass: Per above, there was a discussion at Wikipedia talk:Did you know#Brave Bunnies (not sure how to permalink this before it is archived) in which Gatoclass objected to the hook, feeling that the hook fact was only weakly supported by the article/sources. Gatoclass later suggested that I write a secondary article, which I have done at Sunflower TV (2600 characters prose). I don't know where to take the nomination from here. Gatoclass, what was your idea for a double nomination? (I can provide additional QPQ as needed.) – Reidgreg (talk) 15:50, 22 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Apologies Reidgreg, I meant to get back to this today and clean forgot - unfortunately it will have to wait until tomorrow now. But I'm very pleased to read that you've added the second article! - it sounds like a very worthwhile topic and I look forward to reading it :) Gatoclass (talk) 15:58, 22 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Reidgreg:, having read through some more of the sources, it appears that only content from the United Kingdom and Ukraine was broadcast. And the rights waiving appears to be from British broadcasters waiving rights to their own programs (see, for example, this source). That means the existing hook won't work. But a new hook is needed regardless in order to fit in the new Sunflower TV article, would you like to propose an alt or two for that? Thanks, Gatoclass (talk) 11:14, 25 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Sources say the initial content was UK and Ukrainian, though more may have been added, and even children's shows are increasingly becoming multinational productions. I may have taken too broadly the statement "Everyone involved has given up their time and rights to their content" in the context of the list of 20 companies named by Broadcast MagazineProQuest2677615627 and BBC Studios which 'leant support'. (Checking their Wikipedia articles these include: A UK studio, a UK programming block, 5 UK producer/broadcasters, 2 UK multinational producer/distributors, a Ukrainian multinational producer/distributor, a Ukrainian producer, a Ukrainian producer/broadcaster, a French multinational producer/distributor, a Canadian multinational producer/distributor, and 4 US multinational entertainment companies.) Granted, 'lending support' is not the same as 'waiving rights'; some of these companies apparently donated manpower, technical knowhow and other resources to set up the channel.
ALT2: ... that Brave Bunnies was among the Ukrainian children's series streamed ad-free on Sunflower TV for Ukrainian refugees across Europe, the United Kingdom and Ukraine?
Comment ALT0 is probably the most interesting, but I'm about 60% sure the WP article needs to also refer to the spat as a shipping war for the hook to run. Also, shipping wars is a pretty niche term that might be worth a wikilink, so perhaps: ALT3: ... that Olive Garden and Chili's got in a ship war over Destiel? Based5290 :3 (talk) 18:55, 15 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
For some reason I thought this was a GA, and it isn't, though it is quite long. So I put together a list of nits that would be nice to fix. They are not necessary to fix for the DYK, but I thought as long as I put them together I may as well leave them somewhere. At least do fix the words-that-are-not-words, please?
"occasionally referred to as Deancas,[1] and as CasDean within the series itself" - the WP:LEAD is supposed to be a summary of the article, and these alternate names are not given elsewhere in the article body. Please give and cite.
"Supernatural debuted in 2005" - How about a brief intro - "The television series Supernatural debuted..." or even "The American television series Supernatural..." - otherwise the article doesn't explain what Supernatural is.
"From this episode, people began to want the two characters to become romantically involved with each other." "People" is vague, the citations say "fans"; maybe we can say that? Or "shippers"? Also the first of the three citations doesn't really mention "this episode" ("Lazarus Rising").
" At the event, Collins answered the question “Is Castiel in love with Dean?”." - and ...? How did he answer it? Kind of important.
"This created controversy..." "This led to criticism" - the controversy led to criticism?
"...ChiCon, a fan was allegedly banned from the convention as a safety threat" - source says she was banned, and the convention confirmed, so it's not "allegedly". Did you mean "allegedly as a safety threat"?
"He later returned Twitter" - "to Twitter"?
"In 2014, Olive Garden posted about Dean and Sam's preferences." Specify that it's a restaurant, not a person, same with Chili's. Also what kind of "preferences" were meant? Sexual or food or something else?
"When asked about Castiel, Olive Garden replied that he would eat anything from Dean's plate, which was interpreted by fans to be in reference to Castiel." - Well, yeah, when asked about Castiel, they answered about Castiel, that's kind of expected, and does not need to be specified. Or did you mean "in reference to Destiel"?
"grudging [sic] respect" - doesn't need [sic], it's an established idiom
throughout: generally put the commas and periods outside the quotes, not inside, per MOS:LOGICAL
"encouraging queer readings of the serious" - what?
"character's death[9][22][23][24] which also stopped Death from killing Dean.[1][4][5][25][26][27]" - wow, that's a lot of references for one sentence. Do we really need more than, say, two or three at each of those points? Can we pick the best ones?
"His final words were wishing Dean goodbye, which The Mary Sue said was significant as they identified "Hello Dean" as Castiel's catchphrase." - don't you want "Goodbye Dean" here, to make the parallel clear?
There is inconsistency between the tenses used to describe this episode, "Despair". "Castiel admits" - present tense. "stopped Death", "left a handprint","final words were", "was then brought" - past tense. "Dean responds" - present tense. In general we use present, see MOS:TENSE and MOS:FICTENSE, and this article uses it in describing "Fan Fiction"
" written by gay man, Robert Berens, who " - Ew - "written by gay man"? How about "written by Robert Berens, a gay man, who..."
"series' creators, ehilr suggesting" - what?
"Fan Fiction's" perceived dismissal - logical quotes would be "Fan Fiction"'s
" they claimed that the writers were encouraging queer readings of the series and the consistent denial that the story lines exists from creators of the series" - I don't understand that. Did you mean "encouraging queer readings of the series despite the consistent denial..."? And there is a pluralization conflict in "lines exists".
"killing queer characters once they are able to be happy.[3][4][5][9][23][24][26][17]" - again, what a lot of citations. Can we pick the best - oh - maybe - three?
" it was still a major success that the series had managed to bring the relationship into the series' canon in its long run and significant use of subtext" - they said use of subtext was a major success?
"the fans which were blaming The CW, the network on which Supernatural aired, was unhelpful" - the fans was unhelpful? the blaming was unhelpful? The CW was unhelpful? Needs rephrasing for clarity.
"reports Vladimir Putin was planning to resign" - please specify that he was the Russian president, and that he did not, in fact, resign.GRuban (talk) 15:59, 28 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
My understanding of MOS:ALTNAME is that as long as there are less than three alternative names, there doesn't need to be further elaboration in the body of the article. I don't think there's a source elaborating on the etymology of any of the ship names, so there wouldn't really be a good place in the body for the alt names. Based5290 :3 (talk) 08:14, 30 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not the nominator, but I've done a round of copyedits which address some of the concern above as well as some other issues (mostly for concision, in a few cases removed information I thought was poorly supported by the citations or excessively detailed). Rusalkii (talk) 19:35, 29 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: Article has her listed as a possibly living person, but trawling social media reveals that she likely died in 2008. However, the NEA didn't have her marked as deceased in a recent publication, so I'm currently scouring the internet for a RS to confirm one way or the other.
Created by GreenLipstickLesbian (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 8 past nominations.
Overall: I have some concerns about the sourcing (outside the hook sourcing which is fine). 1. There are personal details sourced to a masters' thesis, which would not be considered a reliable source (see WP:SCHOLARSHIP). I looked into this a little as I was concerned that her husband and father have the same first name, certainly not impossible but it caught my eye. 2. Reference 6 makes mention of a piece of art depicting a logo for the, but I did not see this mentioned in the cited newspaper article. Perhaps one of the pictures shows this logo, but that would be original research. 3. Reference 8 is a clip from newspapers.com, but the clipping does not mention Volperian's work. 4. I also don't think it's necessary to cite her daughter's dissertation to indicate the family connection (reference 10).
The article has some sentences that could use editing. For example, 'She carried on embroidering in her adult life and after her move to the United States and, in 1986, took part in a folk arts program in Los Angeles', has and odd combination of 'and' and commas that make it hard to follow.
@GreenLipstickLesbian: - can you address these issues? — Preceding unsigned comment added by DaffodilOcean (talk • contribs) 12:24, 16 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@DaffodilOcean: Urgh, computer crashed after I'd finished writing this. Hopefully I can re-construct my work:
Ah, I was wondering if somebody might bring this up! I agree that the fact it's a master's thesis isn't ideal, but if it helps, I'm not treating it as one - I'm treating it as the interview with Vorperian that it is. Crap for notability, obviously, but hopefully reliable enough for the uncontentious claims that Vorperian makes about herself and that were paraphrased by the student. So that means no claims about the impact of her work on Armenian art, no claims about who nominated her for the award, and no more broad facts about Armenian embroidery itself - but saying that she had three siblings, her parent's names and occupations, and who she married? Again, hopefully reliable enough, as long as I keep one eye on what is DUE given that is is roughly one level up from a SPS as far as that goes. The fact that her husband and father both had the same fairly common name doesn't raise any red flags for me, though the name is more typically romanized as Harutyun. Does this help?
Reference 6: Ah, you're totally right on this; accidentally swapped two sources! It was in the 1982-1996 biographies of award winners compiled by the NEA. PDF numbers are a little off (there it's listed as 54 through 55), sorry, but on a related note I actually managed to find a Facebook post by the ARS showing the embroidery itself! Sorry, I know one of your other concerns was over-referencing, but I mean... it's gorgeous and it has the date she made it.
Refence 8: Mind reading this again? Second column, second paragraph, lists Vorperian as one of the artists in the exhibit and details the time, location, and hosts that the other source omitted to mention.
Reference 10: I see your point here, and I can remove it if you'd like. However, I would prefer to keep it in, as it's just another source confirming that Rita and Lily are related. Not that I have a mistrust for passing mentions in the captions of newspaper photographs or anything...
And yeah I know my writing sucks, sorry. I attribute it the fact that I learnt half my English grammar from Spanish and Japanese classes, and the other half through osmosis. If I can figure out a less awkward way to put things, I'll try, but, being honestly, my ulterior motive for any DYK submission is that it gets me a few free copy editors. I've split the example you listed into two sentences, hopefully that makes it better? GreenLipstickLesbian💌🦋18:28, 26 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
1. For the master's thesis, I would find better sources than that for the statement about 'several exhibits in the California area'.
2. Thanks for updating the reference for the logo. However, Facebook is not a reliable source, so I would remove that. Please also correct the sentence that now says '..though om 1990...'.
3. This is my mistake, I did miss the brief note about her exhibit.
4. I would remove the dissertation. Her daughter's dissertation has no bearing on Lily's work and its presence here just seems to promote Rita's work.
QPQ: Overall: Article 5x expanded. QPQ is not required as nominator has less than 5 nominations. Passes earwig, hook is interesting, cited inline, and verified. Good to go. Toadboy123 (talk) 14:19, 21 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
comment: do we have a timeline for this? it doesn't say specifically in the source that he was still living with his parents when he created the album, nor is the word basement used in the citation. i'd also add that the article has citation overkill in the 'composition' section.--Plifal (talk) 12:32, 19 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
This is a review on the content side and a proposition of new hooks on the hook side.
It was new enough with sufficient QPQ provided at the time of nomination.
There are two uncited passages, He conducted his first public and private audiences during the week before his inauguration, which included the press, the diplomatic corps, Eastern Churches, and heads of the dicasteries of the Roman Curia. and a Reactions item that leads to a listing article. I'd be fine with the latter. The former needs attention (and I understand this is a new part of the article comparatively).
ALT2: ... that between the time that white smoke was seen at the 2025 papal conclave and the announcement of a new pope, the crowd in St. Peter's Square swelled from 40,000 to approximately 150,000 people?
That's fine. The hooks aren't. ALT1 fails WP:DYKHOOK, which demands that "Superlative hooks such as first/biggest/most [...] require sourcing that discusses the set in some detail; a throwaway comment in an article about the subject is not sufficient." and ALT2 puts the claim in wikivoice, while the article attributes to the Italian law enforcement.--Launchballer11:27, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Source: This is the first occasion that the scholarships, formerly known as the Yang di-Pertuan Negara Scholarships, are being awarded since Singapore achieved independence in August, 1965. The winners are...Koh Cher Siang, 20, (Outram Secondary and Raffles Institution)... "Nine top pupils receive the President's Scholarship". The Straits Times. 24 April 1966. p. 13. https://eresources.nlb.gov.sg/newspapers/digitised/article/straitstimes19660424-1.2.20.41
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Created by BenTanXiaoMing (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
@Launchballer: Apologies for the delayed response. The nine awarded could be considered as the inaugural acceptees as the scholarship was renamed after Singapore's independence. An alternate hook is suggested too. Thanks! BenTanXiaoMing (talk) 16:08, 31 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That's worse. I think what @Jeromi Mikhael: was getting at (and they are free to correct me on this) is that the hook does not meet WP:DYKINT, and I agree (something's going to be first). ALT1 is a more verbose version of ALT0.--Launchballer08:34, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"A total of 40 egg capsules of V. ebraea were found attached to the green calcareous alga Udotia occidentalis A.Gepp and E.S. Gepp (Fig. 1 A and B) in the same place that V. ebraea adults were found (1 to 2 meters depth in sea grass beds off Paracurú beach, Ceará state, Brasil)."
Article is new enough and long enough, recently promoted to GA. I've made a small change in the hook ("Hebrew" is always capitalised). All material is cited to what appear to be reliable sources, and I can see no copyvio or BLP concerns: all images have appropriate licenses. The hook is interesting, though I don't think it fully appears in the article: we have the attachment of V. ebraea capsules to algae, rather than hard substrates like shells, represents a novel ecological observation within the family Volutidae, but I don't see "fan-shaped green algae thalli" anywhere, or indeed in the quotations pulled from the sources here. QPQ needs to be done.UndercoverClassicistT·C17:30, 25 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Ah yes, well spotted -- it does say so in the template. @Daniel Cavallari: we should therefore we good to go once the hook is in the article (and fully sourced). If it's already there and I'm just missing it, could you point me towards it? UndercoverClassicistT·C06:29, 8 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
User talk:UndercoverClassicist I believe there's a misunderstanding. The references do not mention that the alga's thallus is fan-shaped; they only state that Voluta ebraea deposits its eggs on the thalli. This doesn't change the fact that they are fan-shaped, which can be visually confirmed by the illustration included in the article. This isn't a violation of the Manual of Style due to original research; it's merely a visual observation. If you still believe this is problematic, I can remove it from the hook, but I think it would lose a considerable part of its appeal to the general public. Nevertheless, it's your call. I'd be fine with any of these options. Daniel Cavallari (talk) 22:53, 19 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'm sure there is one -- I've just had a look through and can find the following:
This species is known to lay egg capsules only on the calcareous green algae Udotea occidentalis (Fig. 1B), usually one capsule per algae (18.2 – 2.63 mm in diameter)
Matthews-Cascon et al. (2010) observed 40 egg capsules of V. ebraea attached to the calcareous green algae Udotea occidentalis
However, I can't find any mention of thalli at all. Is "On algae thalli" just another way of writing "on algae"? As you note, the hook isn't strictly in the cited source, so I'd be inclined to rework it into something that is -- perhaps "on a single species of green algae"? UndercoverClassicistT·C05:38, 20 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Arguably, if you examine the figures in both references, particularly fig. 1B in Meirelles (2024), you'll notice what appears to be an egg capsule attached to the thallus of U. occidentalis. While the thallus itself isn’t explicitly mentioned in the text, the structure shown in the figure is, in my view, unmistakably one. That said, I agree it’s wiser to adopt a more cautious approach and stick strictly to what the sources state. In that case, I believe "on the calcareous green algae" would be the safest and most accurate choice. Daniel Cavallari (talk) 12:11, 20 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
In the need to get this nomination moving I would propose this hook-
Alt1 ... that Hebrew volute lay their egg capsules on green algae but not hard surfaces?
@Daniel Cavallari and UndercoverClassicist:, the article MUST follow citation rules, with the hook being cited directly after it appears in the text. Daniel you have admitted that the source text does not use the term talli at all, we need to follow it as what you currently have in the article skirts over the line into WP:OR/WP:SYNTH. I will note the article is also written in very dense language and really should be copy edited to comply with accessibility for a general audience, but it should not be held up for that reasoning.--Kevmin§19:06, 29 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'm vetoing this one due to time taken, and the internal issues with the article and nomination not being rectified.--Kevmin§00:32, 2 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I didn't know that the presidential veto existed at DYK! I would share the judgement that the article itself is, overall, ready for DYK (mindful that this is not the same as saying that the article is perfect, or does not have flaws which I would hope to see corrected), and would think that the hook is eminently fixable in short time. UndercoverClassicistT·C08:18, 2 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
ALT1: ... that Elizabeth Ellis Hoyt's work on cost-of-living metrics is considered to have led to the creation of the Consumer Price Index in the United States? Source: https://historicexhibits.lib.iastate.edu/20thWomen/Listpages/hoyt1.html Elizabeth Ellis Hoyt (1893-1980) was a Professor of Economics (1915-1970) at Iowa State. She is best known for her association with early efforts that led to the creation of the Consumer Price Index, which is now used to gauge inflation and the cost of living.
The claim in ALT1 is far from uncontroversial. The Wikipedia article for Consumer price index doesn't even mention Hoyt, and if you ask the Internet who the inventor of the Consumer Price Index was, there are multiple competing theories. The claim that Hoyt is "considered the inventor" vs. "the inventor of a forerunner" isn't even consistent within the article itself. The article itself needs more work in order to be ready for the main page and scrutiny by thousands of readers. @CaptainAngus and SL93: Pinging. Cielquiparle (talk) 22:20, 25 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Cielquiparle: Is your concern more about ALT1 or the article itself? I also struggled with how to interpret the claims made by multiple sources giving various forms of credit to Hoyt for the CPI (here, here, here, and here). The specific wording in the article ("[Hoyt] compiled cost-of-living metrics into what is considered the forerunner of the Consumer Price Index") was chosen to reflect the claims in the sources, and ultimately is not inconsistent with the American CPI article. Looking at ALT1 now, that wording would probably need to be softened, but it's not clear to me which hook is being used for the DYK. What are your thoughts? Thanks! CaptainAngus (talk) 23:02, 25 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@CaptainAngus: The second sentence of the article still says, "She is considered the inventor of the modern day Consumer Price Index." Which is not the same thing. And it doesn't matter if another promoter selects ALT0. At minimum, that inconsistency should be resolved within the article. Even better would be to improve the article further. (I see you are a member of Women in Red; an editor there may be able to help.) Cielquiparle (talk) 12:44, 26 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Cielquiparle: Ah, thank you for that catch! I made updates to both the article and ALT1. Would you help me better understand what the specific concern behind your request to further improve the article is? Every statement in the article is sourced, and I would contend that the article appropriately summarizes the majority of available source data on her--in fact, I wish there was more to cite! So, appreciate any further feedback! CaptainAngus (talk) 19:28, 26 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The article has a good outline but seems rather superficial given the number of sources available about her. I will see what I can do to help. Either way, maybe another editor can promote it. Cielquiparle (talk) 19:41, 26 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I only got through "Early life and education". It is going to take some time because there is so much information about her, even if historians wish there sere more. But in general my advice is to read the sources more closely for detail. Cielquiparle (talk) 01:58, 27 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
... that in college, football player David Viaene was able to run a mile in equipment faster than some of his team's wide receivers, even though he weighed 285 pounds (129 kg)?
Overall: Expanded from 495 to 3634 seven days before nom. Found a few fixes I had to do that the GAR didn't appear to notice, but otherwise nothing of note beyond article being good to go. ミラP@Miraclepine21:44, 26 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
BeanieFan11, I'm not one to regularly pull up American football hooks on DYKINT, but you need to know what "wide receiver" means to find this interesting, and (unlike terms like "score a touchdown" or "kicker", where you can get some idea from the word alone) it's not immediately guessable that it means "fastest player on the field". I think some workshopping is needed. Thanks, though, for introducing me to the term "long snapper". ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 10:50, 30 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@AirshipJungleman29: To be fair, I thought outsiders would be enticed by having to link to the term? After all, readers who hover their mouse on the link would know what exactly the linked item means, but then only on a PC. If that's not enough, I have a few ALTs (these are the only ones I was able to think of, and the second half is if enough people are familiar with the bench press):
@AirshipJungleman29: Well, I'm not sure printability and offline reading are as important a use for the main page as an article for NOFORCELINK to apply to DYK hooks (after all, DYK rules and article P&Gs are different sometimes), but we should take that to WT:DYK. Still, thank you. I'll let Beanie decide on the hooks. ミラP@Miraclepine00:52, 31 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
What I said on ERRORS was that I was afraid something like this would happen. How is that interesting? I don't believe he would have been awarded "best staging of the year" for something that harmless. Matthew told a complex (fictive but based on real lives) story of a man fleeing the Nazis, becoming a Pulitzer Prize-winning author and professor of literature in California c. 1960, suffering a creative crisis and leaving everything, returning and then coming out causing a scandal at that time. This complex story-telling in analogy to the medieval character in a crisis and expelled by society (invented in the 19th century) won him the award, but is too complex for DYK rules. Therefore I intentionally did not nominate. Readers might rather be interested in Wild coming from from South Africa and the production at the Frankfurt Opera, again voted "best opera house". --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:46, 2 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Just as a comment and not a review, but honestly I do think that the original (and now struck) hook was the most interesting option and perhaps the one most likely to get non-specialist readers. I'm fine with ALT1a, but in terms of attracting readership it is admittedly weaker. @Launchballer: Do you find ALT1a fine, or is a new direction needed? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:41, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Source: #1: "The first chocolate crinkle cookie recipe can be traced to a woman named Helen Fredell in St. Paul, Minnesota in the early 1950s. The recipe was originally published in a Betty Crocker cookbook, which explains that it was a cookie Mrs. Fredell served in her home, and guests couldn’t resist taking the recipe home and trying it for themselves." Betty Crocker; #2: "Credit for the original chocolate crinkle cookie recipe goes to Helen Fredell of St. Paul, Minnesota; it was published in a Betty Crocker cookbook in the early 1950s." Taste of Home
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Created by MaPhilIndo (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
I'm convinced there is a lot of room for improvement in this hook. Most types of food were invented by someone and ended up in cookbooks. (t · c) buidhe22:36, 30 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
ALT2 ... that although the chocolate crinkle(pictured) was invented in Minnesota, it is more popular in the Philippines?
ALT1/ALT1a is technically imprecise as it is not the DOST itself that made a study about it but rather one of the agencies under it: I will leave it to you if ALT1/ALT1a remain suitable or not. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:25, 5 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
... that American football players Tommy Akingbesote and Kyonte Hamilton grew up in the same community, play the same position, and were both selected in the seventh round of the 2025 NFL draft?
Source: NYT (paywalled - can email you the password if you need to verify it)
Date, size, neutrality, copyviospotcheck, etc. all fine. There are, however, two problems. First, the hook is pretty boring, although I cannot come up with anything more interesting. Closing admin - or double checking one, whom we seem to have more these times - can offer a 3O if necessary. More serious is the article itself, which I've tagged for notability and started a talk discussion (frankly, I feel this should go to AfD to gauge a wider consensus). Sorry, Soman - your work is usually stellar - but this time I feel we need to think more about this one. PS. The two problems above are somewhat connected: it's hard to come up with an interesting hook on a uneventful election that itself may not even be notable (a student union election at a Nepalese university, with that union not even having an article right now).--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here03:46, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
New enough and long enough. Nominator is QPQ-exempt. Hook fact is in article and reasonably interesting (needed adjustment in hook presentation as the quote includes brackets from source). Image is appropriately licensed for Main Page use. Good to go. Sammi Brie (she/her · t · c) 20:31, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Passing comment: Hi Gerda, nice article once again. But I'm afraid most readers will have no idea what is going on in the hook. Bremps...17:01, 7 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
This song was believed to been medieval but actually was a 19th century paraphrase, which became popular with the Youth movement (1920s) and - most surprising - is still popular today. Sorry that it is complex. I see a double quirkiness in it - the belief that is was medieval (but still popular today) and the unexpected interest in the 1920s (but still popular today). When a topic has a complex history why not speak/teach about that? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:26, 15 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That information about it being a paraphrase is not currently in the article. If it's added to the article and a clear non-technical hook based on it is proposed, I think it could work. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:37, 15 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
In the article: "Ströse published a poem collection in 1878, Deutsche Minne aus alter Zeit – ausgewählte Lieder der Minnesänger des Mittelalters, presenting medieval poems in his free transcription." - bolding by me. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:33, 15 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Trying to please, I changed the verb to "paraphrased" in the sentence regarding this paticular song, one from that collection. Please help wording a hook, - perhaps you are able to word that for a long time it was still believed to be medieval. The 1920 youth movement should be present to connect to the image, also it seems worth knowing that for decades, the song remained in the background, but then hit some nerve. Please let's get this up soon, or spring will be over. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:43, 15 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I bet that will land at ERRORS for saying "inspired" instead of "paraphrased", and you left out the quirky possibility that it was taken for medieval. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:00, 16 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Not a review, but I'd like to point out some things for the benefit of the first-time nominator here. The article in question is linked in bold from the hook, which I've done. Thegoofhere, there is also a failed verification tag that will need addressing before the page is passed. Sammi Brie (she/her · t · c) 22:58, 4 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I was about to review this, but the article is in dire need of a copyediting. Pinging our resident soccer expert SounderBruce to take a look at the article, or perhaps asking for help from sports expert BeanieFan11 in helping copyedit the article. FWIW, if this is to proceed, ALT2 sounds okay, but it might be a good idea to either link or explain "relegated" for the benefit of our non-soccer fan readers. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 14:40, 11 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Ping SounderBruce, I think Saigon Port FC should be split from HCMCT FC and have its main article, as this club was regarded as one of the best most notable clubs in Vietnam around the 90s, many sources that talk about this club before and after it dissolved [5][6][7][8], what do you think? KhoaNguyen1 (talk) 05:13, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
This doesn't seem like a case of a phoenix club or spinoff, and if Ho Chi Minh City FC is claiming pre-2009 titles then they are a continuation and thus would include the full history of Saigon Port FC in their article. I won't be able to provide further input, as I am very busy, so I'll be dropping out of this conversation. SounderBruce05:20, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
... that doctors stationed in India, like Eileen Niedfield MD of the Medical Mission Sisters, trained nurses for Mother Teresa's Missionaries of Charity, and sometimes they trained each other's teams?
ALT1: ... that [Medical Mission Sisters
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Comment: I'm not sure if I'm supposed to include links and formatting, so I did. Thank you!
Improved to Good Article status by Oh-Fortuna! (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
@Buidhe:I think the hook stripped out because I added formatting, so just now I put it back without formatting, and cut it down to one hook. If you want formatting I can send a version with that. Oh-Fortuna! (talk) 16:30, 1 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
There's a ton of great DYK material in the article, I'm quite sure we can do better than that. Something about being invited to Bhutan, belonging to a Catholic religious order while helping Muslim and Christian women, etc. (t · c) buidhe04:33, 2 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, how about this? ... that Eileen Niedfield MD, a Medical Mission Sister in India from 1955-1992, treated rural Muslim women who could not afford care and whose fathers or husbands would not let them consult male doctors? Oh-Fortuna! (talk) 19:01, 2 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Shorter is better when it comes to hookiness. I see this is your first DYK so if you don't mind let me propose an alt. Also, please remember to boldface and link the article in question.
I wanted to promote this but when I checked the article, the hook fact is sourced to the Gazette of India which does not back up the claim at all. @Oh-Fortuna! and Buidhe: Perhaps you meant to cite a different source? In any case, there is a {{failed verificaton}} tag within the article now that needs to be resolved. Cielquiparle (talk) 22:39, 25 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Source: "When the producer then suggested getting a hooker in to give Morrison a blow job, while he did the vocal, things did not go so well though. 'We went with a later take', Densmore concludes diplomatically" - Wall; "According to the legend, Morrison's 'cosmic mate', Pamela Courson, gave him a blow job while he overdubbed the vocals for 'You're Lost Little Girl'". - Weidman
Overall: Article is new enough, long enough, no apparent copyvio. The hook is kind of racy but doesn't break guidelines and it's well sourced. This nom looks good to go. BuySomeApples (talk) 04:02, 2 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I think the ALT hook would address any issue with the original hook, but if there is an objection that can be discussed. Rlendog (talk) 13:28, 2 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The first hook may be WP:GRATUITOUS, but the ALT uses technical terminology and should be ok. But if the admin promoting the hook disagrees, an alt could be:
Source: "The most important German naval enterprise established in the Netherlands was the design firm of N.V. Ingenieurskantoor voor Scheepsbouw, or IvS (a front for AG Vulcan Stettin, AG Weser and Germaniawerft), founded in The Hague in 1922. Admiral Paul Behncke, commander of the post-war German Reichsmarine from 1920 to 1924, insisted that German naval design, particularly U-boat design, be continued clandestinely abroad and was the driving force behind the establishment of IvS...The Koninklijke Marine, through the association of its own personnel with these firms, received access to their technical developments while allowing the Reichsmarine and later Kriegsmarine to cover much of the financial investment.""DE RUYTER CLASS CRUISER DE RUYTER...The Koninklijke Marine turned to IvS to prepare the design of the new cruiser, intent on taking advantage of the firm’s access to recent German design developments." PG 10, 12, 18, 20 from The Royal Netherlands Navy of World War II by Ryan Noppen
ALT1: ... that an essay contest was held to determine the design of HNLMS De Ruyter(pictured)?
Source: "A Controversal Cruiser....A prize was offered for the best essay on the best type of cruiser for the Royal Netherlands Navy..."PG 75, Profile Warship: Her Netherlands Majesty's Ship De Ruyter by F.C. van Oosten
ALT2: ... that the shipwreck of HNLMS De Ruyter(pictured) went missing in 2016, with the wreck's imprint on the ocean floor still visable?
The article is new enough (GA on 27 April 2025), long enough (15.771 characters), has no copyright issues (per GA review), and is presentable (per readthrough and GA review). QPQ is not required. The image is used in the article and its license seems in order. The first hook is interesting, but seems incorrect because the ship was ordered in 1932, and design started before that, and Nazi Germany was established in 1933. ALT1 is interesting, but also seems incorrect, only objections to an already proposed design emerged through the essay contest, according to the article. Therefore I prefer ALT2, but I noticed that the year 2016 that is not in the article text. From the source that covers the other elements, it is not clear when exactly the discovery was made, so I approve the shorter ALT3 version. – Editør (talk) 09:48, 4 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
ALT3 ... that the shipwreck of HNLMS De Ruyter(pictured) went missing, leaving only an imprint on the ocean floor?
@Editør: Thank you for the response! While I do not object to ALT3, I believe thw main hook is still factual. Ship design does not end when the vessel is laid down; instead, it is a continuous effort until (and even after) she enters service. De Ruyter entered service in 1936, well after IvS was directly influenced by Nazi Germany. Even by the most conservative definitions, only the concept design of De Ruyter was finished when she was ordered in 1932. The Kriegsmarine was founded in 1935, meaning there was a solid year when IvS was funded by the Kriegsmarine as the cruiser was still being worked on. What do you think of this? Best, GGOTCC02:51, 5 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your explanation of "designed" and about the timeline. I don't think the first hook should be selected, because I think it needs further explanation to be clear. – Editør (talk) 10:35, 5 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
... that Jessica Rabbit's costume designer wanted a fully sequinned dress but it was too expensive to animate?
Source: Johnston's original design for a fully sequinned dress was too expensive to animate, so it was changed to a solid red colour gown [Costume Design in TV and Film, Nancy Capaccio]
ALT1: ... that Forrest Gump's blue shirt was custom-made to look cheap? Source: "I wanted all the plaid mismatching and one side of the collar slightly longer than the other so it looks cheap" - quoted in Los Angeles Times article, 1994.
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5x expanded by FilmCostumes (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
I am concerned about the source to text integrity in this article. The wording also borders on non-neutral at times.
The first two sentences of the first paragraph of "Costume career" was referenced to this article, which does not mention 1977, Bermans & Nathans, or freelance work. The last sentence had no reference at all. I've added CN tags.
"Many costumes from Johnston's early collaborations with Zemeckis have been dubbed "iconic"" - referenced to [9], which does not use the word "iconic" and does not mention Johnston. I've added a CN tag.
"Joanna Johnston coined the term "Hollywood Lift"" - while "lift" or "lifted" appear as adjectives in the source, the term "Hollywood Lift" does not, nor does it say anything about Johnston coining it. I've removed this and revised the sentence.
For The Witches, this ref supports that she used Powell as inspiration, but does not mention Cruella de Vil or 101 Dalmations. Removed also.
It's a very bad sign for there to be this many issues not even halfway through the article. Respectfully, FilmCostumes, I have to ask - did you use AI to generate your version of this article? Some things are accurate to the source, but there are other statements that are so off that I have to wonder how they came to be. ♠PMC♠ (talk)00:56, 23 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the feedback - PMC no, it's not AI generated! I did do it in a bit of a rush, and re-structured it from chronological to thematic, so clearly I need to tidy up my references better and remove some of my own interpretations. Apologies - will work on improving it! FilmCostumes (talk) 08:14, 23 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Oh, wow, yeah, you need to remove anything that's your own interpretation, in any article you've written. We have to limit ourselves to reflecting what's in reliable sources, per our policy on original research. It's an improvement, I still have some concerns about neutrality in the current version. There are quite a few quotes that seem unnecessary and create an editorial rather than a neutral, encyclopedic tone. For example, we don't need to quote a film blogger calling Hellraiser an "iconic nightmare of 1980s cinema". It doesn't add to the understanding of Johnston's role as a costume designer, but distracts from it by switching focus to some guy's description on the film. A few other issues on further reading:
"Forrest's costumes were praised for their "consistency through the decades"" - "were praised for" makes it seem like lots of critics said similar things, but you've only cited one
"For the infantry, they had about 800 costumes made specially, so they could be distressed and broken down" the source supports the number of uniforms, and it supports that the costumes were altered to reflect the ongoing war, but I don't see that the source necessarily connects the number of the costumes to the distressing process. It doesn't really talk about the infantry costumes in the paragraph that's about the breakdown - it's about Albert and the officers.
Why is Lincoln introduced after it's first mentioned?
"The "fashion forward" wedding dress" editorializing quote, at the least it needs attribution
"withstand the impact of high-altitude stunts" - the source seems to suggest it was just the one stunt, but you could also mine the detail about the stuntman's disintegrated off-the-rack suit
While I'm here...I'm trying to limit myself to DYK-level critiques, but from a reader's perspective I think the thematic rather than chronological organization of the article is frustrating. It puts things out of order (why are we seeing her second Oscar before her first?) and intermixes analysis (ex. from Landis) with the biography. I'm not asking you to tear the whole thing up here and now, but I think it's worth pointing out. I apologize if I'm coming off as harsh. Genuinely, I think what you're writing about is important and interesting (I'm known for my own work on fashion articles). If I didn't think it was worth doing right, I'd have complained and moved on. But I think you potentially have the bones of a Good Article here, not just a DYK, so to me it's worth identifying. ♠PMC♠ (talk)02:43, 24 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
ALT2: ... that the screenplay for Smashing Frank was developed from an assignment in a filmmaking course? Source: [3]
ALT3: ... that Fruit Chan was slated to produce the crowdfunded film Smashing Frank, but had to exit because the limited budget could not cover him? Source: [4]
^吳霆俊 (11 April 2025). "搗破法蘭克｜談善言林家熙楊偲泳大爆兒時反叛史 岑珈其為易角疑雲解畫". Hong Kong Economic Times (in Chinese). Retrieved 1 May 2025. 《搗破法蘭克》作為首部眾籌成功的電影，有望為電影發展殺出新血路。 [As the first successfully crowdfunded film, Smashing Frank is expected to pave a new path for film development.]
^鄭思珩 (7 May 2022). "《搗破法蘭克》以眾籌抗主流 奪回創作話語權【專訪】". The Culturist (in Chinese). Retrieved 1 May 2025. 劇名中的「法蘭克」源自電影《捉智雙雄》（Catch Me If You Can）中狄卡比奧所飾演的少年詐欺犯法蘭克（Frank Abagnale） [The "Frank" in the title comes from the character Frank Abagnale, a young con artist played by [Leonardo] DiCaprio in the film Catch Me If You Can.]
^馮曉彤 (30 April 2022). "專訪《搗破法蘭克》編導蔡康凝——眾籌拍戲，講香港年輕人的憤怒與反抗". Hong Kong Inmedia (in Chinese). Retrieved 1 May 2025. 《搗破法蘭克》最初是導演班的功課，經過導師陳果多番指點修改，最終在2019年頭寫成。 [Smashing Frank was originally a course assignment for the director, and after multiple revisions guided by mentor Fruit Chan, it was finally completed in early 2019.]
^嚴嘉栢 (18 April 2025). "《搗破法蘭克》換角、資訊發布惹議 眾籌開戲變數多 「不敢說是一條新路」". Ming Pao (in Chinese). Retrieved 1 May 2025. 2022年眾籌時，陳果陪同蔡康凝接受媒體訪問，並表示擔任監製；惟今年3月公布上映消息後，才發現監製不再是陳果。蔡康凝解釋，陳果在開拍前一星期仍給予意見，幫忙修改劇本，「如果我們本身籌了整個項目450萬（港元）的話，我們找阿果（陳果），其實他就可以完全掌控這件事。但是到了現在是一半一半，如果我們想阿果做監製，我們都需要出份糧給他，但是錢不夠，還有那時候阿果有很多其他commitment」。 [During the crowdfunding in 2022, Fruit Chan accompanied Trevor Choi for media interviews and stated he was serving as a producer; however, after the announcement of the release in March this year, it was revealed that Fruit Chan was no longer the producer. Trevor Choi explained that Fruit Chan was still providing feedback a week before shooting began and helped revise the script. "If we had originally raised the entire project budget of HK$4.5 million, we could have had Fruit completely in charge. But now it’s half and half. If we want him as a producer, we need to pay him, but the money isn’t enough, and at that time he had many other commitments."]
^嚴嘉栢 (18 April 2025). "《搗破法蘭克》換角、資訊發布惹議 眾籌開戲變數多 「不敢說是一條新路」". Ming Pao (in Chinese). Retrieved 1 May 2025. 蔡康凝表示，《搗破法蘭克》眾籌做法參考對象有二：美國影評YouTuber斯托克曼（Chris Stuckmann）及香港導演趙羅尼。斯托克曼的頻道訂閱數字目前約200萬，2022年3月宣布眾籌拍電影Shelby Oaks，僅用文字和短片講解概念，24小時內達成眾籌目標25萬美元（約195萬港元），最終超額，籌得逾139萬美元（約1084萬港元），2024年電影上映，比原定計劃遲一年。 [Trevor Choi stated that there were two references for the crowdfunding approach of Smashing Frank: American film critic YouTuber Chris Stuckmann and Hong Kong director Ronnie Chiu. Stuckmann's channel currently has about 2 million subscribers. In March 2022, he announced a crowdfunding campaign for the film Shelby Oaks, using only text and short videos to explain the concept. The campaign reached its goal of $250,000 (approximately HK$1.95 million) within 24 hours, ultimately exceeding expectations and raising over $1.39 million (approximately HK$10.84 million), with the film set to be released in 2024, a year later than originally planned.]
... that Civilization was almost called “Fame Whores of Hedge Fund City”? Source: Newest York interview "it may be called BORED, it may also be called MOTHERFUCKER, or FAME WHORES OF HEDGE FUND CITY" – which is actually still a quite good name."
ALT1: ... that Civilization was supposed to be horrible, unlikable and partly AI-generated? Source: Print magazine on issue #6 "What is the reason for your up-yours-design? —To do something unlikable, repellent, horrible, ugly." Its Nice That article on issue #6 "And in some areas the human element was rejected entirely with Richard sharing that over half of the issue was made using AI writing tools."
ALT2: ... that Civilization began in New York City? Source: Its Nice That interview "I went to BJ Magazines on Varick Street at lunch – one of the better places to get magazines [in New York], but somewhere I’ve been going less and less,” recalls designer and art director, Richard Turley, of the day back in January he decided to create his latest project, Civilization."
ALT3: ... that Civilization responded to the COVID-19 pandemic by mailing letters? Source: The Guardian article "in 2020, as coronavirus rages through the city, the people behind Civilization – a singular print publication stuffed full of the musings of random New Yorkers – are reviving the concept. For $3 (£2.40), which you pay through their online store, they’ll send you a personalised letter."
Comment: ALT2 is funny as a rug-pull for readers who think it's talking about "civilization" and not Civilization but I'm ok with not using it since it's the blandest of the 3.
Created by BuySomeApples (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 47 past nominations.
Article new enough (May 2), long enough (5300 B), no copyvio (Earwig says 45.9%, but only direct quotes that are properly attributed). Approving ALT0 or ALT1, both good options for a quirky hook; both hooks verified in primary sources. ALT2 would work as an April Fool's hook, except the article doesn't actually specify that the magazine started in New York. @BuySomeApples: Sourcing is mostly good—primary sources are used neutrally, and there are enough independent sources (The Guardian, El País) to establish notability. Just one question, though: can you explain what makes News Paper Design a reliable source? — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs)05:41, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
News Paper Design looked reliable enough at first glance because it seems to have some kind of editorial standards, but I removed it since it seems like a niche source anyway. BuySomeApples (talk) 03:17, 2 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I find the wording of this hook to be problematic. The sources say the "most significant impact" of the 2011 Christchurch earthquakes was "psychological". To me, this is not exactly the same as saying "mostly psychological", which could be read as "it's all in your head". The former expression suggests that the psychological impact could be "significant", meaning it needs to be taken seriously. (Others' interpretations may vary but to me it really sounds like an inadvertant minimization of the issue while trying to "paraphrase".) @Panamitsu and Dracophyllum: Pinging. Cielquiparle (talk) 18:54, 26 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
As flagged at WT:DYK, I am uncomfortable with the sourcing for this DYK hook. It's hardly a "hypothesis" but rather more like an "urban legend" that no one will seriously "test". When you go back to the sources, they discuss the claim very vaguely and unconvincingly. This is precisely the kind of claim that lands at WP:ERRORS. It's really confusing within the article itself as well – are we saying that the cake originated in Capri, but that it's possible the Italian-American mafia might have invented it in the United States? @Vacant0, BeanieFan11, History6042, and Chiswick Chap: Pinging. Cielquiparle (talk) 21:34, 25 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
ALT1 hook looks OK but the article is still not OK. It currently says, "It originates from the island of Capri, however its story is disputed." We are stating in wikivoice that the cake's origins in the island of Capri are a FACT (citing just one source, an Australian foodie channel). And then we're saying the origins are "disputed" and uses words like "hypothesis". It's clumsy and misleading, almost like we're saying this is a deep academic debate between historians when in fact it's just food journalists and recipe writers writing breezy magazine stories – which is fine but then let's revise to present it more like it is (urban myth? pop culture? meme? but not science and not serious history). And if the encyclopedic entry is stating as fact that the cake originated in Capri, are there other sources we could cite? Until it's fixed I frankly am not sure it's main page or even GA-worthy. Maybe that's harsh but that's what some critics will say at WP:ERRORS on the day...and it's a picture hook so it gets extra scrutiny. Cielquiparle (talk) 05:37, 3 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: This was submitted a little over a week (created on May 4 but submitted on May 12) but I wasn't sure was any flexibility on that. But it has expanded 5x since May 5 so maybe that is good enough to qualify.
Created by Remember (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
Careful. You cited page E11 in the article, but dodgeball is only mentioned on page E10. Also, "the congregation" was (at the time the source was published) 49 nuns, but only 6 nuns worked at the school. Also, the traffic isn't interesting. How about, more simply, ALT0: that the nuns of Daughters of Mary, Mother of Our Savior have played dodgeball in their full black religious habits? DS (talk) 16:47, 15 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@DragonflySixtyseven: Both pages E10 and E11 are used to cite different information in the sentence talking about (among other things) dodgeball causing traffic in the article. Two sentences later, the article states that "In 2006, the school consisted of 60 students and seven sisters", not 6 nuns, so I'm unsure what your concern was in either of these cases. As for the new ALT0, that's fine if you you think that's better! Cheers! Johnson52405:00, 16 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
To be more clear: regardless of whether the school employed 6 nuns or 7 nuns, they did not employ the congregation of 49 nuns. DS (talk) 14:42, 16 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'm still confused, sorry. Nowhere in the article does it say the congregation "employed" any nuns, that doesn't make sense. The only part of the article that mentions 49 members is at the top of the history section, where it briefly mentions in 2006 the "total numbers of members [had] increased" since the last count in 1988. I don't see where in the school section this issue is present. Johnson52418:32, 16 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Please read more carefully. At no point did I make any statement about the congregation employing nuns. I made a statement about the school employing nuns. I stated that the nuns who were employed by the school, did not represent the full congregation. They merely represented part of the congregation. The number of nuns employed by the school was less than the number of nuns in the congregation.
"The congregation" is the set of all nuns belonging to "Daughters of Mary, Mother of Our Savior". The set of nuns which the school employed is a subset of "the congregation".
This is gonna be embarrassing if I still don't understand you, so please bear with me. Are you referring to the wording of the ALT0 hook and not the article itself? That wasn't clear to me, but would make so much more sense. In that case you're right, and I've made an ALT0a correction to change the word "congregation" to "convent", seeing as the school location is also its own convent in the congregation. Cheers! Johnson52404:04, 20 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Johnson524: Am I missing something? It appears that the article does not meet the 5x expansion criteria (prose size). The expansion seems just under 3x. With your last edit on 12 May, when you submitted the DYK nomination, per DYK check, the article was "16766 characters (2709 words)", while on 28 April, the last edit before you began expansion, it had "5683 characters (911 words)". — ERcheck (talk) 19:30, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@ERcheck: The article was almost entirely rewritten from scratch after the AFD, I thought I'd hit the mark but maybe not after removing the excess of citations in the music section, lowering the byte count. Oof, good catch, that's disappointing. I'll try again if I can get the article to GA someday in the future 🙂 Johnson52416:26, 2 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Johnson525: NOTE: Size is not determined by byte count, but rather "prose size" (character count), excluding 'wikitext, templates, lists, tables, section headers, image captions, block quotes, the table of contents, and references." — ERcheck (talk) 18:49, 2 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Article does not meet 5x expansion. This is why DYK favors new articles. It is pretty difficult to 5x an article that isn't a stub. Take this to GAN for a second chance. Viriditas (talk) 22:56, 2 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Source: "This holds from the era of zoot suits, as worn by a young Malcolm X, to Langston Hughes’ Harlem Renaissance tweeds, to the berets of Black Panthers like Huey P. Newton, to Jidenna’s contemporary classic man. And while the focus at this year’s Met Gala is on menswear for the first time since 2003, it’s also on Janelle Monáe’s tailored suits, Missy Elliott’s Afrofuturism and Grace Jones’ avant-garde androgyny." (https://www.msnbc.com/opinion/msnbc-opinion/met-gala-theme-black-fashion-dandyism-superfine-rcna204417) / "The contemporary Black dandy, Miller said, is not confined by stereotypes or labels. He is Chadwick Boseman sporting a holy Versace cape to the 2018 Met Gala. They are Kai-Isaiah Jamal, the first Black trans model to walk for Louis Vuitton, wearing an Abloh-designed zoot suit in 2021. She is Doechii winning Best Rap Album at this year’s Grammys in a superfine Thom Browne suit-gown. He is the cohort of style figures hosting this year’s Met Gala — Pharrell, A$AP Rocky, Lewis Hamilton, Colman Domingo, and honorary chair LeBron James — all of whom have played pivotal roles in reshaping what it means to be masculine and fashionable." (https://hypebeast.com/2025/5/the-met-costume-institute-superfine-tailoring-black-style-contemporary-designers-monica-miller-curator-interviewer-dandy)
ALT1: ... that the style of Black dandyism flourished during and after the Harlem Renaissance as a means of self-expression in the African American community through fine European tailoring? Source: The roots of Black dandyism lie in the intricate weaving of Black culture with European-style fashion—beginning in the post-Emancipation period, but coming into full force during the Harlem Renaissance. In the 1920s, Harlem became the epicenter of Black intellectual and artistic thought. Figures like Langston Hughes, Josephine Baker, and Zora Neale Hurston were breaking barriers with their literary and artistic contributions. But equally important was the cultural revolution taking place in fashion. The Black dandy of the Harlem Renaissance was someone who used dress to assert themselves in a world that often denied them dignity. Just as dandyism had once represented defiance against the traditional aristocracy, it now became a way to reject the limitations placed on Black people in America. The sharp suit, the polished shoes, the bow tie—these were not just fashion choices; they were ways of asserting one’s right to exist on their own terms. In a racially segregated America, the Black dandy’s outfit became a form of resistance, an elegant middle finger to a society that sought to define them by race, not character. (https://www.vogue.com/article/what-is-black-dandyism)
Comment: Earwig shows a higher percentage of copyright violation because of a few reasons: 1) a Reddit post citing the lede in a blockquote and 2) a book title by Monica L. Miller that virtually every source names in full. If there are other pressing copyvio concerns, however, I would be more than happy to revise the page to address them.
Created by Phibeatrice (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.
@BeanieFan11: Could we slightly reword hook to ALT1 "... that German athlete Leander Wiegand received a scholarship to play American football at an American college that had never seen him play?" "German American football player" reads a little ambiguous; reads like "German-American". This is also more concise I think. QPQ done, article long enough, reliably sourced, hook reliably sourced, no copyvio, article new enough at time of nom, no subjective issues with article I can spot. grapesurgeon (seefooddiet) (talk) 01:12, 17 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@BeanieFan11, grapesurgeon (fantastic username), and AirshipJungleman29: I've pulled this hook partially because there's a fatal defect with the hook itself and partially because I'm not comfortable with the article's current sourcing. First, the hook is sourced to a the player's self-proclaimed mentor giving an interview to a league they've both played in. Interviews can be reliable, but I don't see how this one can be given that the interviewer isn't a professional journalist, the publication isn't independent, and the interviewee is essentially self-publishing claims about a living third party. Second – and this is more subjective – articles should be based on independent sources, but I'm seeing more citations to league publications than I am actual independent publications (and that's before we get into the fact that apparently, the fantastically-named Hamburger Morgenpost disappointingly uses AI in its editorial work). So, sending this back here for more work – hopefully there's a better source to back up the hook, or another hook that can be found? theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 06:54, 26 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Comment — Uninteresting as written when it's well known that his leg was fused as a result of the tuberculosis and he still went on win tons of competitions in spite of the disability. Also, using a paid obituary for the source when there's seemingly no end to actual reliable sources discussing his life? Similarly, using a non-free image scavenged off the web when there are numerous publications with expired copyrights containing photos of Attla? To the latter point, as we continue to claim to be a collaborative environment, all you had to do was ask. RadioKAOS / Talk to me, Billy / Transmissions 02:30, 9 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I added a different source, there are plenty. Perhaps you can find an image? This is, as you pointed out, a collaborative project. I did not find numerous publications where the copyright had expired and so left the image placed by a previous editor. Annwfwn (talk) 10:40, 9 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
ALT1: ... that Ann Hui (pictured) interviewed two poets who got into an argument in unused footage from Elegies? Source: [2]
ALT2: ... that the shoot for Elegies in Taiwan was almost canceled despite Ann Hui (pictured) already being there, as it was during the peak of the COVID-19 pandemic? Source: [3]
ALT3: ... that Ann Hui (pictured) allowed the editor to work independently on Elegies? Source: [4]
ALT4: ... that director Ann Hui (pictured) worked for free on Elegies? Source: [5]
ALT5: ... that Ann Hui (pictured) intended to make a documentary about poetry back in 1976 before began working on Elegies in 2020? Source: [6]
ALT6: ... that the title of Elegies comes from a suite of poems that Ann Hui (pictured) read during the film's pre-production and found touching? Source: [7]
^黃保慧 (13 March 2024). "男主角演戲份被剪光 名導許鞍華透露：他演得很差！". United Daily News (in Chinese). Retrieved 4 May 2025. 許鞍華在片中以戲劇形式重現黃燦然的多首經典詩作，其中一首詩卻因為由黃燦然親自演出，反而害得整首詩全被剪光。許鞍華直言：「他演得很差！連走路都不自然，後來只能忍痛把整首詩都剪掉了。他是勉強地演了，可是他真的不是演員。」 [Ann Hui visualizes several poems by Huang Canran in dramatic form within the film. However, one poem had to be completely cut because Huang performed it himself, which was detrimental to the overall piece. Ann Hui candidly remarked, "His performance is very awful! Even his walking was unnatural, so in the end, I had to painfully cut the entire poem. He performed reluctantly, but he really is not an actor."]
^余婉蘭 (22 November 2023). "許鞍華、廖偉棠對談：香港經此世變，詩是高度痛感｜金馬入圍紀錄片《詩》". Initium Media (in Chinese). Retrieved 18 February 2025. 其實我還訪問了兩個詩人，那個訪問挺精彩⋯⋯因為他們兩個吵起架了，是熒惑和洪慧。但如果我們放進這部分，就多了一隻「腳仔」（支線）。當作之後還有一集。 [Actually, I also interviewed two poets, and that interview was quite exciting... because they got into an argument, they are Jacky Yuen and Hong Wai. But if we include this part, it adds a "subplot". [I will] Consider it for a sequel.]
^項貽斐 (22 March 2024). "【專訪3】不以地域界定香港詩人 黃燦然「經濟流亡」深圳、廖偉棠移民台灣". Mirror Media (in Chinese). Retrieved 18 February 2025. 疫情期間拍攝，許鞍華無論去深圳、台灣都得隔離，還因疫情的緊張、和緩讓隔離天數有時變長、有時變短，尤其來台拍廖偉棠時，忽然疫情升溫，製片擔心危險，不想造成工作人員或廖偉棠家人的困擾，希望許鞍華在台隔離結束就回香港。但是她認為，人都來了，就拍一點，盡量小心。 [During the filming period of the pandemic, Ann Hui had to quarantine whether she went to Shenzhen or Taiwan. The duration of the quarantine varied because of the fluctuating intensity of the pandemic. Especially when she came to Taiwan to film Liu Wai-tong, the pandemic suddenly intensified. The producer was worried about the danger and did not want to cause any trouble for the staff or Liu Wai-tong's family, wanting Ann Hui would return to Hong Kong as soon as her quarantine in Taiwan ended. However, she believed that since everyone was already there, they should film a little, while being as careful as possible.]
^余婉蘭 (22 November 2023). "許鞍華、廖偉棠對談：香港經此世變，詩是高度痛感｜金馬入圍紀錄片《詩》". Initium Media (in Chinese). Retrieved 18 February 2025. 剪接時，我們跟剪接師說，我想怎樣，這件事怎樣，其實說得很抽象。我們拍的東西不是很多，他就關上房門，自己自彈自唱，搞了差不多四五個月。 [During the editing process, we told the editor what I wanted and how we envisioned things, but it was quite vague. We did not have a lot of footage, so he closed the door and worked on his own, "playing and singing" for nearly four to five months.]
^余婉蘭 (22 November 2023). "許鞍華、廖偉棠對談：香港經此世變，詩是高度痛感｜金馬入圍紀錄片《詩》". Initium Media (in Chinese). Retrieved 18 February 2025. Alice、 Ken和我都是無償沒計薪的，如果一計就不夠錢。 [Alice, Ken, and I all worked without pay, because if we accounted for it, there would not be enough budget.]
^蕭采薇 (20 March 2024). "「金馬紀錄保持人」許鞍華76歲不退休！ 鄭少秋換周潤發內幕曝光". ETtoday (in Chinese). Retrieved 18 February 2025. 許鞍華表示，最早在1975年、1976年間在TVB拍《獅子山下》後，就非常想拍古詩紀錄片及張愛玲的小說《傾城之戀》。雖然當時沒拍成，但這個想以詩為主題的創作熱情卻一直放在心裡等待機會。 [Ann Hui stated that after filming Lion Rock at TVB in 1975 and 1976, she had a strong desire to create a documentary about classical poetry and a novel adaptation on Eileen Chang's novella Love in a Fallen City. Although she did not manage to make [the documentary] at that time, her passion for poetry-themed creations remained in her heart, waiting for an opportunity.]
^項貽斐 (22 March 2024). "【專訪4】詩作影像節奏拿捏有「禪意」 心有所感「哀歌」成「詩」". Mirror Media (in Chinese). Retrieved 18 February 2025. 至於紀錄片《詩》的英文片名為《Elegies》（哀歌、輓歌之意），是源於黃燦然90年代由七首詩組成的《哀歌》組詩。許鞍華說：「這應該是他最有名的作品、也是我第一次接觸到他的作品。那時我不認識他，是在一本詩選集裡看到其中一首，覺得很感動，所以籌備時就暫名《哀歌》。 [As for the documentary Elegies, its English title is "Elegies", which refers to Huang Canran's suite of seven poems from the 1990s also titled Elegies. Ann Hui said, "This should be his most famous work, and it was my first encounter with his writing. At that time, I did not know him; I saw one of the poems in an anthology and felt very moved, so during the pre-production, I use "Elegies" as the working title."]
Comment - whoever reviews this, please see Wikipedia_talk:Did_you_know#Moratorium_on_"first"_hooks?; while the project hasn't yet enacted any sort of restriction on "first" hooks, this is going to be under scrutiny so the sourcing and the evidence for the above claim will need to be strong (I haven't looked yet so I have no idea if it is or not). Cheers — Amakuru (talk) 21:46, 16 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Overall: Cambalachero All sources that I can find verify the hook fact. The reading order section needs to be referenced. I am not approving ALT1 as not interesting. SL93 (talk) 22:38, 29 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'm looking at the article right now and nothing stands out as a hook that works for non-Trekkies. If no agreement on a new hook can be made, or no new hook can be proposed, we may have to fail this one unfortunately. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:51, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Based5290, article is new enough, long enough and QPQ is unnecessary. Violation is unlikely as Earwig found 14.5% plagiarism, but I believe this close paraphrasing should fixed, "provides the kind of empathetic and insightful commentary that should be exemplary to critics on YouTube and beyond", quoted from Indy Film Library. I also don't find the hook interesting, or is it just not clear enough? I guess I'll leave the hook to more experienced reviewers. dxneo (talk) 21:56, 8 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
My apologies. However, I still don't feel like the hook is "wow". Everyone cover world news nowadays, so how is this any different? It fails WP:DYKINT. A new hook, from a different angle is required. dxneo (talk) 06:00, 15 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
ALT2, any reason why the f in "flat Earth" is in lowercase? And in the article, the a in "In Search of A Flat Earth" is supposed to be in lowercase per WP:MOS. Polygon does not directly say anything about landscapes and this hook does not appear in the article, making it fail WP:WIADYK. Moving on to ALT3, a comment made by a non-notable individual, still not interesting enough. I guess other reviewers might say different, so I'm requesting a second opinion. dxneo (talk) 15:32, 16 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
ALT2: Polygon article: "The video is shot beautifully, with loving and reverent shots of nature that not only contribute to the video’s content and concepts, but also capture a sense of still beauty." The claim does appear in the article in a slightly different form: "Williams and Jef Rouner of Datebook noted the video's shots of the Canadian landscape as beautiful." The f if "flat Earth" is lowercase because that's how the Flat Earth article treats it. ALT3: As far as I can tell, comments by non-notable reviewers are entirely fair game for hooks unless there is a dispute about the reliability of the reviewer (or the comment itself is uninteresting). See Template:Did you know nominations/Fedora (short story), Template:Did you know nominations/Polo (novel), Template:Did_you_know_nominations/Life_Till_Bones. Based5290 :3 (talk) 22:39, 16 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Just noting that the GA review that admitted this was woefully inadequate and is being challenged at WT:GA, so I'm putting this on hold until someone does a proper job.--Launchballer03:32, 11 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
... that the Bishop of Chiclayo, Edinson Edgardo Farfán Córdova, said his predecessor, the future Pope Leo XIV, formed his identity while riding horseback through mountainous communities in northern Peru?
Source: "In his opening greeting, the first American pope broke from his Italian remarks to speak — not in English, but in Spanish — to his “beloved diocese of Chiclayo in Peru.”
The diocese, in a northern Peruvian city with a population of about 600,000, is celebrating the election of one of its own. In a news conference Thursday, the bishop of Chiclayo, Edinson Edgardo Farfán Córdova, described Pope Leo XIV as “our brother,” a former bishop of Chiclayo who spent much of his ministry in northern Peru. Farfán described the pope’s time in northern Peru — riding horseback through mountainous communities — as formative years for Leo. By mentioning Chiclayo in his first remarks, Farfán said, Leo is signaling the importance of reaching out to the margins. He is following in the steps of Pope Francis, Farfán said, supporting “a church with open doors, a church that reaches out and welcomes everyone,” with an emphasis on helping the poor." Washington Post
Thank you for the article about who succeeded the Pope in his former position, on fine sources, Spanish sources accepted AGF. I like the hook idea! I believe, though, that we can't say the Pope was formative, because at that time he wasn't yet Pope, and the articles doesn't say (but should) that these rides were formative for him. I wouldn't mind a bit more prose, because in my (rather small) display the infobox is longer than the article ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:36, 20 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That is better, but - comparing to the source more than before - I see that I misunderstood, because I thought that "his" meant the new bishop. How about first the name, then the position, to connect to the former one on the post more easily? ... and perhaps use the wording from the source that seems clearer? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:46, 20 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
that is better but still unclear about who is meant by "his". Trying:
ALT0b ... that Edinson Edgardo Farfán Córdova, the Bishop of Chiclayo, said that the years that his predecessor, the future Pope Leo XIV, spent there, riding on horseback through mountainous communities in northern Peru, were a formative time?
@Crystal Drawers: Thanks for waiting, and sorry for a long message in advance! So, you mentioned this draft of a possible addition to the Manual of Style – I would say that even if it were part of the MoS, it still wouldn't supersede the basic principles of what goes into an article. Neither does the fact that some or even many other articles aren't written to the same standards – lots of articles were written at a time when standards were lower or in a topic area where enforcement of policy is less rigorous, but that doesn't mean that policy shouldn't be enforced rigorously.
As to what discourages using DVD extras: I would argue that a core principle on Wikipedia is that our coverage of a topic is shaped by independent, professional sources. They're the people we trust to separate what's important and true from what isn't, and overusing self-published material gets in the way of that ideal. The guideline I'll cite here is WP:SELFSOURCE, which says that people can be reliable sources of information about themselves as long as the source does not involve claims about third parties; it also says that use of self-sourced material should be minimal; the great majority of any article must be drawn from independent sources. I do see some self-published sources being used for claims about third parties, and I wouldn't say that the use of non-independent sources in the article is minimal.
I do think that correcting the first one would go a long way towards addressing the second, so I hope I'm not pushing too much of a burden on you! Please let me know if there's anything I can do to help :) also, I kinda wanna get around to watching this show now. it's been on my list forever...theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 06:42, 29 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
References
^Irwin, William (November 8, 2011). Arrested Development and Philosophy: They've Made a Huge Mistake. Wiley. ISBN9781118146262.
Just passed GA, so the timing checks out. It's definitely long enough, well-sourced, hook and QPQ are done, and no copyvio issues popped up. ALT0 probably reads better for general readers, but ALT1 feels more interesting to me, it's a bit less dry and sparks more curiosity. We're good to go! Mariamnei (talk) 09:26, 16 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Pulled. This will take essentially a complete rewrite to adequately address the sourcing problems, so calling this {{DYKno}}. See my analysis at FAC for details. RoySmith(talk)20:46, 23 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'll leave that for others to address; I'm not the gatekeeper of what's allowed or not allowed. But I will say that I'm more concerned about putting out a good product and not getting dragged to WP:ERRORS than I am about what awards you qualify for. RoySmith(talk)10:33, 24 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
ALT2: ... that the 16.9 kilometres (10.5 mi) tracks at the Singapore Rail Test Centre is compatible with various types of signalling systems and is powered by both direct-current third rail and alternating-current overhead catenary? Source: International Railway Journal
Comment: according to the page bytes, the article is only 2x expanded, but I also removed much of the original page when I redid it, and had I done this in separate steps, the new page would be 5x expanded
5x expanded by Gb321 (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
Long enough: - Yes, per below discussionUnfortunately, this is still not long enough. We count expansions by prose size, not by raw text size. Even so, the version prior to expansion includes 1,613 bytes of prose (if the block quote is included). The current version of the article has 5,868 bytes of prose. The article would be eligible for DYK if the block quote wasn't included, as the previous version minus the block quote is 1,026 bytes, but I don't know whether block quotes should be counted here. Other DYK regulars (pinging @DYK admins: ) might be able to advise.
Other problems: - There is a {{One source}} tag. It should be resolved before this appears on the Main Page, if it is eligible. Since the source in question is a reliable source, though, I think it can be removed. (See Amakuru's comment below; this must be resolved, even if you were the editor who added the tag.)
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
I'm not sure the "one source" template should be removed or ignored, even though it was apparently put in there by the nominator... the fact that there are no other sources used for that section means it's almost certainly close paraphrasing, and an orange-tag issue should be resolved properly. — Amakuru (talk) 13:23, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I do not think we should count the quote for the pre-expansion size. My prosesize tool does not and I think this meets the 5x expansion test. —Kusma (talk) 13:28, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The DYK admins template should only be used for emergencies, but prose is measured by characters not bytes and the blockquote isn't counted towards character count, so this is (at best) a 4.16x expansion, from 1409 to 5868. If you can resolve the tag and any/all close paraphrasing, WP:GA is that-a-way.--Launchballer13:34, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'm using DYKcheck, which shows 1409/188 even after editing the previous version to remove the blockquote and showing preview.--Launchballer13:55, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
My bad. Next time I'll post on WT:DYK instead, I didn't realize that template was not a general-use template for pinging DYK admins or regular users. That being said, I came to the same conclusion as Kusma regarding the prose size; I just thought the block quote in the previous version of the article might pose some problems if it were treated as prose. Epicgenius (talk) 13:56, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
thanks for the feedback everyone. I'll work on getting that 'one source' tag removed
This is not a review, but how well-attested is the claim that the novel was the first Ukrainian-language sci-fi novel? That's quite a bold and exceptional claim, and per the guidelines such claims require exceptional sourcing to make sure that it's actually true. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 14:58, 11 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Narutolovehinata5: I agree the current sourcing is so-so; the cited source (FantLab) is not listed as unreliable, but it also does not strike me as scholarly. Unfortunately, if better sources exist, they are in Ukranian/Russian, and searching in these languages is hard for me (I've asked AI to search for scholarly sources in ru/uk; if I find anything better I'll update this post). I've proposed a safer ALT1 below, backed up by a reliable English ref. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here09:27, 12 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Overall: Article is generally in good shape and expanded more than 5x during the window. All hooks are sourced; I think ALT2 is the strongest of them. Two images have free licences which check out; the main portrait is used under fair use; we should really give some detail of the efforts taken to find a free-use image rather than simply asserting that none probably exist, but I'm not going to be too insistent on that here. QPQ is done. There are quite a few passages which seem to closely paraphrasethis obituary; this needs to be addressed before the article can hit the main page. For the benefit of (perhaps far) future readers, I would consider explaining why his funeral was held virtually -- hopefully, we will soon get to the point where readers need reminding of the exact dates of the pandemic. UndercoverClassicistT·C20:54, 14 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@UndercoverClassicist: Thanks for the review! Given that I only cited Ross & Blust once (which re-reading it, I should have used more), would you mind pointing out some of the CLOP issues? I tried really hard to avoid them with Geraghty & Pawley (2021) in particular, so I must've accidentally fallen into Ross & Blust in error. Earwig basically just spit out a concern because of the biblio and because I like to spell out the names (e.g., of universities) in full. As for the funeral, I almost put in that it was because of COVID... but I couldn't confirm that; his four brothers lived in Australia and I couldn't confirm that it wasn't because of some other reason (e.g., they couldn't afford to fly out) without dipping into a WP:OR issue. ThaesOfereode (talk) 23:47, 14 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It doesn't help that the two sources are very similar indeed (to the point where I'd certainly raise concerns if they were Wikipedia articles!), so I can see how you've ended up very close to one without using it heavily. Actually, it's clearer to use Geraghty and Pawley directly to show the issues. A few examples -- source text first, article text follows:
(Geraghty and Pawley): In 1958 the Lynches moved to Melbourne, where John attended the Jesuits’ Xavier College. ... In his high school years he studied Latin, French, Greek and German — in fact the school didn't offer German so he taught himself and was tutored by the Austrian wife of one of his teachers, and he passed the German exam too in his final year: versus The Lynches lived in Wahroonga, a suburb north of Sydney, until 1958 when they moved to Melbourne. There, John attended Xavier College, a boarding school run by the Society of Jesus, during which he studied Latin, French, Ancient Greek, and German. Because the school did not offer German as a subject, he taught himself before being tutored by a member of the staff's Austrian wife. The structure is identical, with some phrases lifted verbatim, and others lightly rearranged (e.g. "a member of the staff's Austrian wife" for "the Austrian wife of one of his teachers".
(idem) In 1964 John obtained a Commonwealth Scholarship and began an honours degree in Arts at The University of Sydney, graduating with first class honours in 1968. ... His sole linguistics teacher during his four years at The University of Sydney was Rev. Dr. Arthur Capell versus Lynch began his undergraduate studies in 1964 after receiving a Commonwealth Scholarship. He attended the University of Sydney, receiving a degree in anthropology and a linguistics distinction with first-class honours in 1968. At one point the only student in the honours linguistics program, Lynch's only linguistics professor was Arthur Capell
(idem) For the next few years he divided his time between teaching at UPNG, taking courses at the UH, fieldwork on Tanna, writing his doctoral thesis, and taking over the editorship of Kivung (later renamed Language and Linguistics in Melanesia) ... Lynch was editor of volumes 7 to 11 from 1974 to 1978, then review editor from 1982 to 1986, and an associate editor or editorial board member from 1986 onward versus During this period, Lynch both taught at the University of Papua New Guinea and took classes back in Hawaii while writing his dissertation. He also assumed the chief editing role at the academic journal Kivung (now Language and Linguistics in Melanesia) ... Lynch was chief editor between 1974 and 1978, though later served as a reviewing editor from 1982 to 1986. From 1986 until his death, he served as either an associate editor or as a member of the journal's editorial board
(idem) After twenty-one years, John’s stint at the UPNG came to an end. ... he and his wife Andonia Piau-Lynch (known to all as Andy) and their two young sons moved to Vanuatu, where Andonia forged a career first as an educational psychologist (the only degree-holding psychologist in Vanuatu) and later as an advocate for the rights of people with disabilities and for women’s rights.After twenty-one years at the University of Papua New Guinea, Lynch left to begin work at the University of the South Pacific's Emalus campus; he, his wife, and two young sons moved to Port Vila, Vanuatu, towards the end of 1991. While there, his wife worked as an educational psychologist on the island and was the nation's only psychologist with a degree. She was later an advocate for women's rights in Vanuatu, as well as for those with disabilities
You've clearly made efforts to rephrase, but fundamentally these are minor variations keeping the same selection and arrangement of facts, which is a copyvio concern. UndercoverClassicistT·C05:31, 15 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Admittedly it was a bit difficult, but I think I've shuffled things around and rephrased them enough to avoid copyvios. Please let me know if there are any other areas of concern; I didn't realize how much of the copyvio stuff I was flatly ignorant on, so apologies. ThaesOfereode (talk) 01:43, 17 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I've put a few copyedits in, but I think the article now needs a good look for comprehensibility and grammar -- I'd suggest reading each paragraph, going away for a minute, then trying to re-write the same ideas without looking at it. We're in an awkward place at the moment where the writing is trying to contort itself to get away from the original sources, leading to awkward phrases which don't always say what we mean (I've removed "languages such as...", for example, as that was very much not supported by the source), or are otherwise rather strained: see Although German was not available as a class outright, he had success teaching himself the language. Eventually, he was tutored by a local Austrian native who was married to one of the schoolteachers and passed the final exam. UndercoverClassicistT·C08:33, 17 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Source: "It ceased operating as a pumping station in the Second World War[...] But , after a two year renovation project, it will now be opening its doors for brides and grooms wanting to marry among its striking features." [17]
@Moondragon21: Thank-you. Comparing to other DYKs, I wonder if the image needs a simpler (more hooky) caption - eg just 'Dalton Old Pump House: the Boiler Room'? (If so I'm not sure how/whether to alter it at this stage).
@Moondragon21: Thanks again - agreed - I've made that change in the template (which I hope is the right thing to do) and will now leave it well alone!
Per WT:DYK discussion, I have reverted the promotion and pulled from the DYK queue. Concerns about WP:PROMO and independent sourcing need to be resolved before this is approved. @Barabbas1312: Please address those concerns and ping Moondragon21 when this is ready for a re-review. Z1720 (talk) 18:50, 31 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
If this is to be reapproved, it will have to run with a new hook. Cielquiparle proposed the following at WT:DYK:
Cited: - If we are being precise, the source does not say nucleariids are the closest relative of fungi; it says they "form the earliest branch in the holomycotan clade (fungi and closest relatives)". The source cites research that notes they are close relatives, but the source does not say they are the closest relatives.
Interesting:
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Overall: Some alternative hooks would be good. It would be better if it said that nucleariid amoebae are among the closest relatives of fungi. Aneirinn (talk) 23:23, 20 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Well, mycologists agree that Rozellomycota are fungi, same with Aphelidiomycota (see for example this ref, which is the outline of fungal classification). While it is true that these "lower fungi" were often traditionally studied by protistologists as protists, modern protistologists agree that they belong to the Fungi (see doi:10.1111/jeu.12691 for the scientific consensus of protistologists). If you still don't change your mind, I'll re-write it. — Snoteleks (talk)01:21, 21 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I agree, the scientific consensus does seem to be that they are fungi. I still am unsure if nucleariid amoebae are the closest relatives of fungi. I have looked for it but have not been able to see where it says that in the source. Aneirinn (talk) 17:45, 25 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Aneirinn: The source has a cladogram depicting the relationship, and it shows nucleariids ("kingdom Nucleariae") as the sister group of the kingdom Fungi. This relationship is also explained in the taxonomic section, where the two kingdoms are grouped within superkingdom Holomycota. There are no other kingdoms included there. — Snoteleks (talk)21:33, 25 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think the current hook will survive scrutiny, either at WT:DYK or at WP:ERRORS. Newly-added guidelines at DYKG state that exceptional claims, to which "closest relatives to fungi" is an example of, require exceptional sourcing. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:55, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Narutolovehinata5 I proposed this one (which I agree is a bit dull) as I got nervous about proposing other hooks based on her feminism. That said she is a prominent figure, so perhaps I am being too overly cautious? What about:
Adequate sourcing: - Ref 4 doesn't say The Upward Shadow was her first, and the 1993 publication date there conflicts with ref 2 saying it was 1990. Some of the works are uncited, though citing to the work itself shouldn't be an issue.
Overall: Prose size 2310 B; created two days before nom. Prefer ALT1a per Narutolovehinata5. After some straightforward copyedits (including one I forgot to save before saving the checklist), article is mostly good. @Lajmmoore: fix these issues and I'll approve. ミラP@Miraclepine19:24, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
QPQ: - None submitted Overall: I love the hook, it stood out among the new DYK submissions! The date the draft was moved into the mainspace makes newness good, length and sourcing are good, and I spot checked [2], [3], [4], and [8], and they all appear plagiarism free 🙂 Once you submit your QPQ you should be good to go. Thank you for creating this page, and cheers! Johnson52403:17, 13 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
ALT0a ... that in 2022, the Georgian Philharmonic Orchestra performed a solidarity concert with Ukraine featuring music by Ukrainian and Georgian composers?
I think a centenary is worth mentioning. I also would like to point at how immediately after the invasion that was - perhaps you have an idea. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:16, 23 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The primary hook fact is that they performed a solidarity concert following the invasion of Ukraine. Them being founded in 1925 is irrelevant to that. Again, WP:DYKTRIM applies: ...don't be afraid to trim hooks of extraneous information and clauses... In general, the shorter and punchier the hook, the more impact it has. If your desire is for the hook to run on the orchestra's centennial year, just it being approved and running is all that's needed. No need to mention the year since it's irrelevant to the hook fact. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:24, 23 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
ALT0b ... that following Russia's invasion of Ukraine in 2022, the Georgian Philharmonic Orchestra performed a solidarity concert featuring music by Ukrainian and Georgian composers?
I think that our readers, who are expected not to know this orchestra even existed, get valuable extra information by telling them (in a short phrase) about the groups's long history, - a background giving the fact more depth. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:22, 23 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Reviewed: Reviewing... I will be reviewing this nomination. I am a new reviewer, so I will need a second opinion. NeoGaze (talk) 13:08, 22 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Overall: The article was moved to mainspace on 13 May 2025, and was nominated for DYK the next day. Length is adequate and the hooks are both interesting and properly backed by sources. No image is used and a QPQ is not required for this nomination. The main issue is sourcing beyond the mentioned hooks; A whole section has no sources (Background), but it could use some of the main article it links to. In the list itself, there are several sightings with no backing sources, a case of a failed verification and broken youtube link, and a few uses of twitter/X being used as a reference, which should be replaced for better alternatives if possible. I added several templates and tags to clearly point these issues. Once everything is fixed and double-checked, I will request a second opinion from another editor. NeoGaze (talk) 19:09, 22 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your review! I added some references to the background section, and am currently working on cleaning up the list portion of the article. I apologize, as I admit that I should've gone further with verifying the references before reviewing this page and nominating it for DYK. Thank you again for volunteering at DYK, I will attempt to address the issues with the article at this time. -Samoht27 (talk)20:05, 22 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Source: https://www.med.kobe-u.ac.jp/journal/contents/61/E132.pdf "It also reportedly has high therapeutic effectiveness for muscle cramps in patients undergoing dialysis, patients with diabetes or liver cirrhosis, and patients with dysmenorrhea"; "Shakuyaku-kanzo-to consists of a combination of P. lactiflora and Glycyrrhiza."
@Narutolovehinata5: why do you say that? Almost all sources, including the cited hook, have a PubMed ID, which is especially reliable, According to MEDRS. I see no reason to question their reliability. Cattos💭09:41, 16 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Narutolovehinata5: Is this 24-hour rule outlined anywhere? I have not seen it being enforced on other nominations this strictly. Frankly it is far too short of a deadline and seems to encourage shoddy and quick reviews rather than proper vetting. SounderBruce05:49, 15 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It's an application of WP:QPQ (emphasis mine): Your QPQ review should be made before or at the time of your nomination. A nomination which doesn't include a QPQ (and is not from an exempt nominator) may be closed as "incomplete" without warning. You did not provide a QPQ at the time of the nomination, which makes it liable to be closed. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:07, 15 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The rules need to be revised to reflect the common practice of not having a QPQ on hand at the time of nomination. With the difficulty in finding suitable nominations to review without committing to a potentially time-wasting set of interactions, I do not think it is wise to punish active contributors who would otherwise not make the 7-day nomination window and drop out of the process. SounderBruce07:13, 15 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It is a practice that DYK is actively discouraging now, especially with there being large backlogs and a need to encourage not just helping out backlogs but also weeding out unsuitable nominations. It may have been acceptable in the past to have a delay in providing a QPQ, but DYK has moved away from it now. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:15, 15 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Overall: Thank you nominating this GA for DYK. Overall, the nomination has only minor concerns. The article achieved GA status on May 13, and was nominated for DYK the same day. Length is adequate, I found no plagiarism concerns, and the article is neutral in tone. I found a few sourcing concerns. Something is neeeded which specifically supports "smallest incorporated municipality in the county". Ideally this citation goes in the "Demographics" section instead of the introduction. There is one quote in the "Early 20th century" section that needs a citation as per WP:DYKCRIT. Both proposed hooks are interesting, and mentioned in the article. ALT0 needs a citation directly after the sentence which mentions the town has a Wicca church. ALT1 is properly cited and verfied. All images in the article are freely licensed on the Commons and could be used for a hoook. The nominated image does not depict the church, monastery, or rock walls, so it would not be clear or enahance the hook. I suggest changing the nominated image. The QPQ requirement is complete. Best wishes. Flibirigit (talk) 14:21, 3 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
... that James Patrick Shea thought a 2008 invitation to meet with Benedict XIV at the White House was a hoax and "put it in the same place I put emails with offers for Viagra"?
... that the Rephaim text, a 14th-century BCE Ugaritic poem, tells of divine warrior beings who ride for three days to a threshing floor - only to spend the next seven days eating there?
Source: L'Heureux, Conrad (1974). "The Ugaritic and Biblical Rephaim". The Harvard Theological Review. 67 (3): 265. [20], Coogan, Michael David; Smith, Mark S. eds. (2012). Stories from ancient Canaan (2nd ed.). Louisville, KY: Westminster John Knox Press. pp. 60-63.
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Moved to mainspace by Moonshane1933 (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
Cited: - "beings who ride for three days to a threshing floor - only to spend the next seven days eating there." is verified. "14th-century BCE" is unverified. "divine warrior beings" is unverified. rp'm can be deities, the dead, the king's men.
ALT1: ... that the khachkars at Aprank monastery are the tallest in the world? Source: "Աշխարհի ամենամեծ երկու խաչքարերու կրկնօրինակները պիտի տեղադրուին Մայր Աթոռին մէջ [Replicas of the world's two largest khachkars to be installed in the Mother See]". Horizon Weekly (in Armenian). March 23, 2015. https://horizonweekly.ca/en/64304-2/ "Ս. Դաւիթ մատուռը, որոնց մօտակայքը կը գտնուին աշխարհի ամենաբարձր` աւելի քան 6 մեթր բարձրութիւն ունեցող հրաշալի երկու խաչքարեր" (="two of the world's tallest magnificent khachkars (cross-stones)")
Image is freely licensed and works at thumbnail size. QPQs good, copyvio is mostly good except for an inscribed stone panel decorated with crosses and bearing two inscriptions, one with the date 1854 and Their height and prominent position as direct quotes that should by rephrased. Article recently created. My main issues here are with the hooks: ALT0 says "the largest" while the source says These are said to be the largest, and ALT1 claims "are the tallest" where the source says two of the world's tallest. The hooks, per WP:DYKDEFINITE, need exceptional sourcing to make such claims as "largest" or "tallest", and the sources included do not back it up. The hooks could be rephrased to match the sourcing, perhaps:
I'm rephrased the two problematic passages to avoid copyvio.
Agree with the first hook (and have accordingly rephrased the quote within the article). As for ALT1, Horizon Weekly's text actually translates to "the world's tallest — two magnificent khachkars" not "two of the world's tallest". The original translation is a bit off. It explicitly calls them "the tallest in the world" (աշխարհի ամենաբարձր).
If that's still questionable, we can go with this:
@Buidhe: Not a review, but the article only has three sources, all physical books, and they're all from the same publisher. Do you have any other sources to prove notability for this subject? As is, it looks like a prime target to be merged into Snowpack. Departure– (talk) 02:14, 17 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Departure– There are actually four sources cited, and I would disagree with any merger, because this would be UNDUE in the snowpack article because the types are mostly distinguished for the purpose of avalanche forecasting in North America. (t · c) buidhe02:19, 17 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Buidhe: They're all published by Mountaineers Books, which is my point. Snowpack types, while well cited, is longer than Snowpack, and could very easily be merged there unless either one has enough specifically on them to prevent such (speaking from someone from Wikiproject Weather, where a lot of articles get merged like this). Just a heads-up that you may have an uphill battle before this ends up on the main page; I have nothing against this being promoted if there truly is a reason to keep the pages separate. Departure– (talk) 02:23, 17 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The fact that it's more detailed than the general article is actually a strong indication that the material would be UNDUE if merged. You didn't bother to look for other sources which certainly exist, but simply assumed it's not notable. If you don't have anything against the promotion of the article why are you posting here? (t · c) buidhe02:26, 17 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Source: Frappier, Jean (1936). Étude sur la 'Mort le roi Artu', roman du XIIIᵉ siècle : dernière partie du Lancelot en prose (in French). Geneva. p. 348. "Au Moyen Âge, l'emploi du procédé [de l'entrelacement] ainsi que la formule de transition rudimentaire (Le conte cesse de parler d'un tel et parle maintenant de tel autre), ne semble pas antérieur au Perceval de Chrétien de Troyes."
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Created by InfernoHues (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
Interesting:
QPQ: None required.
Overall: New, interesting, seems to be no copyvios, and with a source accepted AGF (offline). Two minor quibbles: one is that only Frappier is cited here and it seems to be his opinion alone, rather than a citation indicating that more than just him are saying that many literary historians say so. Could we consider:
Feel free to suggest other rephrasing. Two is that the lede should describe, briefly, what entrelacement is. If it's cited in the body, you don't need to re-cite it in the lede, but it does need to be present for the passing reader. That said, great article and welcome to Wikipedia, InfernoHues! ThaesOfereode (talk) 00:48, 17 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@ThaesOfereode I've added a citation that shows that it is the opinion of literary historians in general and added to the lead somewhat (citation 3 and 4 are basically the same but I don't know how to combine them)
... that the artist Cady Noland was sued by two different collectors of her work after she "disavowed" artworks that she no longer considered genuine because they were damaged or altered?
Source: Julia Halperin (Oct 4, 2024), “Just How Much Control Can an Artist Have Over Their Work?”, T Mag (New York Times Style Magazine): “The Swiss art dealer Marc Jancou sued Noland and Sotheby’s after the artist disavowed a work that he wanted to sell at auction. […] Noland visited Sotheby’s to view it, along with two other works destined for the block that season, and found its corners so damaged that she considered the work totaled. Sotheby’s called off the sale. [...] But it was hardly the last time that Noland would defend her art’s honor. There was a series of lawsuits over ‘Log Cabin Facade’ (1990), a life-size wooden sculpture that the artist disavowed after its previous owner allowed it to be installed outdoors for over 10 years and then replaced the rotted wood with new logs. ‘This is not an artwork,’ she said in a handwritten fax addressed to its new owner, the Ohio-based collector Scott Mueller”
ALT 1 (added after discussion below): ... that the artist Cady Noland has "disavowed" several artworks that she no longer considered genuine because they were damaged or altered?
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Comment: First ever DYK nom, please advise if I mis-formatted anything. Thanks!
Improved to Good Article status by 19h00s (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
@19h00s: Hello and welcome to DYK. I don't plan on reviewing this any time soon as I have a policy of reviewing oldest first, but I can tell you the hook won't fly as it is unduly negative. Also, and these are not DYK issues, the image fails WP:IMAGERELEVANCE as you can't see her properly and the sections badly want breaking up.--Launchballer20:22, 21 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, makes sense on the negativity front. I'd disagree on the image front, as detailed in the article and discussions on the talk page (long story short: she doesn't allow images of herself to be created or circulate, this image where she hides her identity has been widely discussed and is discussed in the article). Don't necessarily disagree on the breaking up of the sections, but a biography article necessarily requires a more cogent narrative structure that is extremely difficult to achieve when you spread everything out into sections that break up the chronological flow. Happy to retract this nomination or you can just fail it. 19h00s (talk) 20:34, 21 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
A nomination doesn't fail just because one hook doesn't work. You could probably get away with ALT0a: ... that Cady Noland "disavowed" some of her artworks?, though I'll let a reviewer adjudicate on that.--Launchballer20:47, 21 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Learn something new about Wiki processes every day lol, just assumed this was DOA if the hook was out of bounds as written. Just added an alt version. Thanks for the tips. 19h00s (talk) 22:23, 21 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Overall: Article is new enough and long enough, well sourced and neutral. I copy edited a small paraphrase, but otherwise Earwig shows no concerns. Hook is cited, but I wondered if something a bit snappier could be proposed? maybe about the relationship with Wise, or the potboilers? QPQ is done Lajmmoore (talk) 18:45, 29 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Lajmmoore: Thank you for the review. Suggesting the following:
ALT1: ... that despite his artistic talent, John Linton Chapman sold potboilers and his relatives' valuable paintings to make a living?
Comment: 2nd and 3rd of 8 QPQs used on this review
Moved to mainspace by TonyTheTiger (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 375 past nominations.
Hi Thehistorianisaac, welcome to DYK. I have formatted the original hook and removed the repeated hooks. Regarding your questions:
1. "border police officer" may be sufficient for the hook in line with the lead of the article.
2. No, you have multiple DYK nominations running in parallel.
3. Non-free images cannot be used in DYK.
Cited: - The reference is in Chinese. From Google translate, it seems that news agencies are saying as per the viral video, the dog is waiting for his master even after 10 years; rather than an independently verified fact that the dog is waiting. The article and the hook needs to be reworded. If my understanding is incorrect, please clarify.
Interesting:
QPQ: None required.
Overall: The article is currently at AfD. We will have to wait for the same to conclude, before approving the hook. Most of the references are Chinese news sites, private or state-owned (from Neutrality perspective). RedtigerxyzTalk12:22, 24 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
There isn't really a huge problem with sources, state owned media is usually considered reliable outside of controversial usages, and different language sources are also allowed; As for the hook, from my understanding, it's similar to the Hachiko story. Additionally, the AfD likely won't go very far anyways.ThehistorianisaacTalk23:48, 28 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Afd has concluded as Keep. A RM is underway, however does not impact this DYK IMO.
Assuming The Paper as reliable. "From Google translate, it seems that news agencies are saying as per the viral video, the dog is waiting for his master even after 10 years; rather than an independently verified fact that the dog is waiting. The article and the hook needs to be reworded. If my understanding is incorrect, please clarify." is unaddressed. The references are just saying that there is a viral video which claims that the dog is waiting for its master.
Source: A Fond Farewell from Kate Botello ("I started out as both a Screen Saver and as the puppeteer and voice of Tilde.") and Meet Tilde ("As host of TechTV and of the show the TechTV Zip File...")
ALT1: ... that an anime programming block that originally aired on TechTV was the inspiration for the founder of a Japanese animation studio? Source: SyFy ("In the early 2000s, Isom got hooked on the G4 "Anime Unleashed" program block. That was when he decided to become an animator, specifically in the world of anime.")
ALT2: ... that Erica Hill anchored live coverage of the September 11 attacks on the technology-based cable channel TechTV? Source: CNN ("Hill joined the network from Tech TV in San Francisco, where she was co-anchor and correspondent for Tech Live, a 30-minute daily news magazine. Hill was on the air live when the Sept. 11, 2001, terrorist attacks began and anchored throughout the day and as events continued to unfold.")
Improved to Good Article status by Cat's Tuxedo (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 29 past nominations.
Hi TriMuseumGeek, thanks for you nomination. The article was moved to main space on 22 May so is new enough and is long enough. Unfortunately the sourcing is not up to DYK standards which require a source cited inline at the end of every paragraph as a minimum. I've added the article to the hook above. We need a citation in the article for him dying at 110 in prison (we would also have to say "approximately" to match the article). There are also some grammar issues with the article and it switches between past and present tense. Let me know if you can improve this to meet the criteria and I will take another look - Dumelow (talk) 07:02, 24 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I've incorporated one of the quotes in ALT2. Does that work for you? Let me know if you are looking for something else/specific. – Editør (talk) 11:57, 23 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
ALT2: ... that Femke Bol pulled away "with a superior acceleration" during the final of the women's 4 × 400 metres relay at the 2023 European Athletics Indoor Championships(winning team pictured)? Source: Original Dutch: "Het Nederlandse kwartet liep de hele race aan de leiding. Startloper Klaver profiteerde optimaal van de gunstige buitenbaan 6 en kwam als eerste door. Saalberg en Peeters hielden de eerste positie knap vast, waarna Bol het met een superieure versnelling afmaakte." [English translation: "First runner Klaver took full advantage of the favorable outside lane 6 and came through first. Saalberg and Peeters held on to the first position, after which Bol finished it off with a superior acceleration."] (link)
@Narutolovehinata5: In my experience, the most important part about the DYK nomination is that it is factually correct and the sentence works as a hook. Surely, I want to try and phrase it as well as possible, but when it can be completely rewritten in a later stage by a single author, I don't see the point in endless tweaking when all that work can be thrown out without notice. If you see a better way of working the long article title 2023 European Athletics Indoor Championships – Women's 4 × 400 metres relay into the hook, let me know. Besides that, is there anything else holding up this nomination? – Editør (talk) 00:35, 27 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Maybe something similar to how it was originally proposed in the nomination you linked? Just link to "women's 4 × 400 metres relay" and keep 2023 European Athletics Indoor Championships as a separate mention, perhaps also avoiding linking it as being redundant to the main bolded link. It's like how the linked nomination just said "women's 400 metres hurdle at the 2024 European Athletics Championships." As for your other question, I was not planning to review this nomination, the hook just stood out when I was looking at DYKN (and not in a good way). Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:38, 27 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, I misunderstood. Well, thank you for noting your concern and for your suggestion. – Editør (talk) 00:41, 27 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
ALT1: ... that actress Jennifer Metcalfe used the experience of her father's cancer for acting out scenes in Episode 6465 of the British soap opera Hollyoaks? Source: [28]
... that the 'Washington D.C. Temple(pictured) was moved 60 feet to exactly align with the Capital Beltway, designed to inspire curiosity about what goes on inside?
Source: “After the route of the Capital Beltway was finalized and before the groundbreaking, the location of the temple was adjusted sixty feet to line up perfectly with the Capital Beltway. This small adjustment has had repercussions for missionary work as many people, due to its visibility and beauty, stop by the temple seeking information about its purpose.” …“We hope the design does attract a great deal of attention so people will investigate the Church”
ALT1: ... that the Washington D.C. Temple(pictured) is the tallest and third-largest temple of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints by square footage?
ALT2: ... that the 'Washington D.C. Temple property (pictured) almost became a shopping center, but Zionist Jewish owners sold it cheaper to support temple construction?
Source: “But in the case of the Washington D.C. Temple, the deal to purchase 57 acres of pristine woods overlooking the capital city in 1962 elicited a joyful surprise.”
… “planned to construct a shopping mall and condominium complex.”
“The (Jewish) men varied in their degree of “observance,” but they all identified deeply with their Jewish heritage, and were generous supporters of Jewish and Zionist causes.”
"Kanfer said, 'We’ve decided we’re going to sell it to you for $14,000 an acre. Consider that $57,000 discount our donation for building the temple.'"
ALT4: ... that the Washington D.C. Temple(pictured) was designed like the Salt Lake City Temple to be recognized as a temple of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints?
Source: Source: “(Emily Utt) explained that the temple’s modern six-spire design was built in the image of the Salt Lake City temple, so that it’d be recognizable as an LDS building.”
Comment: I've put the hooks in order of ones I think would work best for the page, along with links and citations to verify information. I'm willing to refine and tune the hooks given, and whichever hook that ends up working in the order I made should be the one that is displayed (unless there is consensus that one is more interesting than the other if multiple would work).
Improved to Good Article status by Itsetsyoufree32 (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
ALT1: ... that dialog in Cyborgs is in Ukrainian and Russian, showing the diversity of the defenders of the Second Battle of Donetsk Airport? Source: GlavcomInterview with director (in Ukrainian). Quote: Саме через цей контекст 40% наших героїв розмовляють російською мовою. Це було зроблене, аби підкреслити, що в Донецькому аеропорту, серед захисників було дуже багато людей, які не розмовляють українською мовою, але ми все рівно одна нація. Translation: "It is because of this context that 40% of our heroes speak Russian. This was done to emphasize that at the Donetsk airport, among the defenders there were a lot of people who do not speak Ukrainian, but we are all exactly one nation." and Griza et al, "Changes in the representation of heroes in contemporary Ukrainian cinema", Journal of European Studies 53(4) p 388. doi:10.1177/00472441231206550 Quote: "The film’s major goal is to demonstrate the diversity of those fighting for Ukraine."
Improved to Good Article status by Reidgreg (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 30 past nominations.
Source: [30]In fact, through the last 120 years of its history, first- and second-generation migrants have constituted a substantial majority of the population.
ALT1: ... that after plans for a railway in Niamey were cancelled during the Second World War, a station finally opened in the city in 2014? Source: [31][...] the major public infrastructures and developments planned on this plan (railway station, green belt made of palm trees, etc.) were slow to be put in place (and were eventually abandoned) since the advent of the Second World War [...] [32] (my translation) The inauguration of the first train station in Niamey took place this Monday, 7 April 2014 [...]
Comment: Open to alt hooks; hoping for a way to fit both articles in one hook.
5x expanded by Vigilantcosmicpenguin (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 4. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 37 past nominations.
Improved to Good Article status by Sammi Brie (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 774 past nominations.
Improved to Good Article status by Sammi Brie (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 773 past nominations.
... that the Academy of Music(example pictured) was the name of three different theaters located on the same property on the Atlantic City Boardwalk which were all destroyed by fires?
Source: Weintraub, George R. (April 12, 1964). "A Poor Player That Struts and Frets His Life Upon The Stage: Bits of History from the Academy of Music—Apollo Theatre". Press of Atlantic City. p. 16, section IV.
... that in 2020, Stavatti Aerospace's only known facilities were a "one-person office suite" and a "machine shop ... slightly larger than a basketball court"?
New enough and long enough. Double QPQ present. Hook fact somewhat checks out but it also mentions a house that is missing in hook and in article. Chetsford, this isn't required for DYK, but consider clipping your Newspapers.com citations for accessibility by non-registered users (and in some cases clipping all pages of multi-page citations). Sammi Brie (she/her · t · c) 17:55, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Bryony Jackson, a deletion nomination is pending on this page so it cannot be reviewed at this time. I also wanted to flag that the ALT1 hook would be discouraged under WP:DYKHOOKCITE: Superlative hooks such as first/biggest/most are discouraged as they are regularly debunked at ERRORS.. ALT0 honestly reads very, very promotionally. Given the discussion of a possible conflict of interest, both hooks may be rejectable if this page is kept and the nomination proceeds. Sammi Brie (she/her · t · c) 18:18, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Source: Plater was best known for writing television dramas including Shoulder to Shoulder (1974) and The Stars Look Down (1975); Oh No It's Selwyn Froggitt was his only foray into sitcom writing. Plater's involvement has been characterised as indicative of a maverick and prolific approach to television writing.
ALT1: ... that Bill Maynard took inspiration from A Midsummer Night's Dream for his 1970s sitcom Oh No It's Selwyn Froggitt? Source: Additionally, Maynard took inspiration from Shakespeare's A Midsummer Night's Dream, with Froggitt as Bottom and the committee at the working men's club as the mechanicals.[11][12]
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Comment: The image should only apply to my first hook and not the alt one. Thank you.
Improved to Good Article status by Humbledaisy (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
A new hook may be needed here as neither hook appears to meet WP:DYKINT. That is, neither hook seems to be appealing or eyecatching to a non-specialist audience, which in this context means people unfamiliar with Maynard or Plater. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:49, 29 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I like that first one. I don't think the second one would work so well because the reviewer was reviewing to Selwyn, the retitled fourth season of the show, so it wouldn't be so snappy to mention that. Is it okay for me to add the first one? Humbledaisy (talk) 16:27, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry all, I'm not hugely familiar with how this works. That sounds fine but I also think the name Selwyn is less familiar to a UK audience than Oh No It's Selwyn Froggitt and less interesting as a title. Apologies if I'm overstepping the mark here though. Humbledaisy (talk) 18:48, 2 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
... that a Minoan tomb at Koumasa in Crete was designed so that sunlight could illuminate its interior precisely at sunrise on the summer solstice?
Source: This refers to Tholos E at Koumasa, which is oriented at a 67° azimuth to align with the solstice sunrise. On that day, the sun shines through the entrance and casts a beam of light up to 7 meters into the chamber—an effect lasting about 20 minutes. This precise alignment suggests a deliberate connection between funerary architecture and celestial events.
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5x expanded by Mykne (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
Adequate sourcing: - Not all paragraphs contain at least one in-line citation. Example, Site description, Excavations (first paragraph). Some unsourced information in remainder of article. Article tagged for inline citations since August 2023
Cited: - No citation given in nomination, article text is cited to reference #9, Ayash 2018, which appears to have an invalid doi. Article publication date also appears to be mis-cited, volume is correct, issue number is not provided, several different page number ranges are provided, then the entire 20 page range of the article is given at the end. The abstract of the article states that the interior is lit by the morning sunlight throughout the summer months, but on the summer solstice, the light reaches almost to the back of the tholos. Sole article author is listed as a PhD candidate, may have issues with reliable source.
Apparently, I was looking at Prose size (including all HTML code) instead of Prose size (text only) on the original revision. Sorry about that. I've changed the "new enough" tag. RecycledPixels (talk) 16:23, 30 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
... that the Five Domains model is frequently used when determining whether euthanasia is appropriate in animals?
Source: Nevertheless, recall that when the intensity of one or more of the survival-critical negative affects is significant, animals are often demotivated from utilising existing opportunities to engage in behaviours that would be accompanied by situation-related positive affects.This could be informative with regard to end-of-life decision-making.
Mellor, David J; Operational Details of the Five Domains Model and Its Key Applications to the Assessment and Management of Animal Welfare; Animals, 2017.
Reviewed: none
Created by CoconutOctopus (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
Article is new enough, long enough, and within policy. No copyright violations detected. I do have two issues to raise. The first is the title. The term "five domains" is very generic, and I don't think the article should remain at this title. There are other concepts in published academic literature that use the term "five domains" like the "five domains of athletic training", the "five domains of social determinants of health", or the "five domains of child development" to name just a few. I would strongly suggest moving the article to something like the Five Domains Model for Animal Welfare because it is clear and is not likely to be confused with other concepts which use the terminology "five domains".
The second issue is with the verification of the hook. Currently, the hook is not directly stated in the body of the article with an inline citation following the fact as required by our policy at WP:DYKCRIT. There is similar language but not exactly the same. There is no statement in the article saying that the FDM model is frequently used in the context of euthanasia decisions. The lead statement does say that the model has been "widely adopted and endorsed" but that fact is not supported in the body of the article with inline citations. You must be careful to not draw conclusions in the lead that are not stated in the body with supporting sources. Mellor, does not address the frequency of use of the FDM model, and the quote in question is only saying the model "could be informative with regard to end-of-life decision-making", not that it is frequently used in questions involving the euthanasia in animals. In looking at Mellor, that source doesn't address the frequent use of the model anywhere. That said, Hampton, Hemsworth, et. al does state the model is frequently used in evaluating animal welfare, but does not address the issue of euthanasia. So here we have an original conclusion in the hook not found in any one source and not stated in the article. This is both a WP:SYNTH/WP:VERIFICATION problem. Per WP:DYKCRIT policy, we need a new hook fact that is directly stated in the article, and verified to a source that has the same fact/content in it. That source should be cited directly after the sentence with the hook fact.
Please propose new hooks below for me to review and ping me when ready. Make sure the hook fact is stated directly in the article with an inline citation immediately following. The fact must not contain original analysis or conclusions through a synthesis of sources. Also double check that all statements/facts/conclusions in the lead are in the body with citations, and that all conclusions directly match conclusions made in a source. There should be no original conclusions in the lead or body that can't be directly found in a single source. Best.4meter4 (talk) 17:42, 31 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I've fixed the lead issues you identified, and have a new hook which I'll place below that I believe meets the criteria! I disagree with the page renaming - the five domains model is widely called just that, and is the primary topic found when "five domains" is searched on a regular or a scholar search, and by far the most common usage of the term. I also think it is a much more concise and relevant title to searches.
... that the five domains model of animal welfare seeks to ensure animals have a "life worth living"?
Mellor, David (14 March 2016). "Updating Animal Welfare Thinking: Moving beyond the "Five Freedoms" towards "A Life Worth Living"". Animals. 6 (3): 21. doi:10.3390/ani6030021. PMC 4810049. PMID 27102171.
Mellor, David J. "Caring for Wildlife" (PDF). World Association for Zoos and Aquaria.
I don't feel comfortable promoting this to the main page because the title is likely to be challenged in my opinion. The term "domain" as a concept is used across the sciences and education praxis in a variety of conceptual frameworks, and having "five domains" isn't unique to this one specific model. "Five domains" isn't a clearly definable term in my opinion. I note the topic is given in some publications as the Five Domains Model (such as https://www.mdpi.com/2076-2615/7/8/60) as a three word proper name. Others lowercase the m (such as https://www.cambridge.org/core/journals/animal-welfare/article/extending-the-five-domains-model-for-animal-welfare-assessment-to-incorporate-positive-welfare-states/867B8AB2C3D6CA25A35B54C0311ECD57) but almost every paper title includes the phrase "Five Domains Model/model" as a consistent way of referring to the concept, and most often it is first introduced in paper titling with the words animal welfare. Additionally, pretty much every source capitalizes the D in Five Domains (including the RSPCA site https://www.rspcaqld.org.au/blog/animal-welfare/the-five-domains and the many journals used in the article). The wikipedia article should not have a lowercase d, and I would oppose a redirect with a lowercase because Five domains is a generic name that can refer to any five domains; whereas "Five Domains" is a proper name of the model. At the very least I think the additional word model should be added to the wikipedia article's title in addition to capitalizing the d/D in Five Domains. As I am opposed to the current article title, I am calling for a second opinion.4meter4 (talk) 00:29, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@RoySmith The D is capitalized in the literature. It should be Five Domains model. To be clear Five Domains is the proper name of the model. Using lowercase letters is a grammatical error. It would be like calling the White House (the official residence of the US President) the white house (which could mean any white house). They are two different things. An obvious grammar issue like this would end up at WP:ERRORS and the hook would be pulled. If we see a likely disputable problem we don't promote articles as they are likely to be unstable.4meter4 (talk) 01:27, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Comment: The footage is PD because the guy did not try to copyright it until 2011, and in fact the citation also verifies it was published in 1988 and not held until later. Too late.
Improved to Good Article status by Sammi Brie (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 775 past nominations.
... that for the 250th anniversary of the death of Johann Sebastian Bach in 2000, three record companies issued recordings of his complete compositions?
Comment: ALT0 is 148 characters. ALT1 is 96 characters.
Improved to Good Article status by ErnestKrause (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 113 past nominations.
Overall: Article is new enough and long enough. The "Early life" and "Career" sections are quite promotional in tone and should be reworded neutrally. DYK hook is interesting and supported by the source. The main problem is the article is currently at AfD, which is why I'm putting this nomination on hold until it's closed. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs)14:57, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
While we wait for the AFD to close, I'd be happy to hear specific details on how to make the article more neutral in tone. Unfortunately I couldn't find sources that thoroughly investigated her claims about her early life. NotBartEhrman (talk) 00:27, 2 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@NotBartEhrman: For example, the Career section contains the sentence Afua's writing on women's health emphasizes consciousness of fertility as key to awakening pride and sense of the sacred self..., which is not mentioned anywhere in the 71 page source that it cites. Several other puffery sentences like this exist. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs)10:30, 2 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Source: for 2021 "1 6 NED - NETHERLANDS 6 0.201 3:27.15 CR" (link)
Source for 2023 "1 NED - NETHERLANDS 6 0.196 3:25.66 CR" (link)
Source for 2025 "1 NED - Netherlands 5 0.171 3:24.34 CR,WL,NR" (link)
ALT1 ... that the cheers were "deafening" when the Dutch team won the women's 4 × 400 metres relay at the 2025 European Athletics Indoor Championships(finish pictured) before a home crowd? Source: "In de finale van de 4×400 meter voor vrouwen bleef het zondagavond lang spannend, toen Bol en de Britse slotloopster naast elkaar de laatste bocht indoken. Maar toen zette Bol, indoor de snelste vrouw op de 400 meter ooit, aan en werd het gat met elke pas groter. Op de streep was het verschil ruim een halve seconde – en het gejuich oorverdovend." [English translation: In the final of the women's 4 × 400 metres on Sunday evening, it remained exciting for a long time, when Bol went into the last bend next to the British anchor runner. But then Bol, the fastest woman in the 400 metres indoors ever, pushed on and the gap grew bigger with every stride. At the finish line, the difference was more than half a second – and the cheers deafening.] (link)
Cited: - "one of the first" is not accurate to the source, which has dozens of entries before Johnson (1893).
Interesting:
QPQ: None required.
Overall: Will have to be on hold while the AFD is still active. The article does need major reworking to focus on the settlement, so I'm leaning a no on this one. SounderBruce03:45, 28 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the review. I'd say WH Johnson was one of the first in a list of firsts, but Your Mileage May Vary. What do you think of this alternate hook? ...that one of the first African-American postmasters in the US state of Virginia was for the Baynesville, Virginia post office?
Moved to mainspace by Miraclepine (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 84 past nominations.
Source: " he learnt the Burch colposuspension which was originally described by the American gynaecologist John Burch, itself a modification of the Marshall Marchetti Kranz procedure a retropubic urethropexy. His research and influence popularised this surgery so that it became the most popular procedure for urinary stress incontinence worldwide" International Continence Society
ALT1: ... that a book described as "an absorbing account of life in the dream world of a schizophrenic" was written by an anonymous author? Source: "Operators and Things: The Inner Life of a Schizophrenic". Publishers Weekly. Vol. 207, no. 5. F. Leypoldt. February 3, 1975. p. 44.
Comment: Tried my best to come up with some real interesting hooks for article 7 mil, would love other suggestions from the current text or if more is added in the future. ALT1 I was a bit unsure about the wording of anonymous vs pseudonymous, but per discussion at Talk:Operators and Things#Replace anonymous with pseudonymous? landed on this. ALT1 is also linked to an offline source, I've asked the author on their talkpage for a scan or equivalent of the source, given the shifting winds I see in regards to AGF sources.
Created by Therapyisgood (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
@PixDeVl: You can just google the quote from Publishers Weekly and look on Google Books and find it that way. Also it's on the back of the 2011 version, I believe, or at the very least it's on the Amazon.com page for the 2011 publishing. Therapyisgood (talk) 01:08, 1 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Therapyisgood: found and verified, thank you! Never thought to just search it funny enough, I queried the whole citation and even combed the Internet Archives a bit for the issue. Cheers! --PixDeVl(T | C | G)
How about something like '...that the author of the 1958 autobiographical account (memoir?) Operators and Things, describing a schizophrenic author's experiences with "operators", has never been identified?' or even simply '...that the anonymous 1958 autobiographical account Operators and Things describes a woman's onset and recovery from schizophrenia, aided by "operators"?'
... that the organisation that disqualified Imane Khelif on gender ineligibility grounds in 2023 was expelled from the Olympic movement that same year for governance failures?
Overall: Hi, @Boxes7313: There are several issues with this page, but the main one is that this page hasn't been expanded by 5x by the nominator. Should you expand the page in the future, please feel free to renominate! Best of luck in your future editing, ThaesOfereode (talk) 23:52, 30 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]
... that Sayuti Abubakar received a recommendation to become Vice Governor of Aceh from the former governor in prison? Source: [33]: “Dewan Pimpinan Pusat (DPP) Partai Nanggroe Aceh (PNA) menetapkan Sayuti Abubakar sebagai Calon Wakil Gubernur (Cawagub) Aceh […]. Surat itu diteken Ketua Umum PNA Irwandi Yusuf di penjara Suka Miskin. ”
Attendees at a meeting of a Welsh presbytery in Berriew in 1940.
... that the term "middle judicatory", which many denominations use for their mid-tier organizations, originated in Presbyterian courts for church discipline?
Source: "Such campaigns disclose yet a third internal system, congregations and regional or middle judicatories. The latter, variously termed association, presbytery, conference, diocese, region, or synod, functions administratively between congregations and the national or international structures and authority." https://archive.org/details/encyclopediaofre0001unse_r5c3
"Fascinating, and less well explored, is the same process that prevailed among congregations of Presbyterians at the same time. Pastors, for example, became supervisors in new and different ways. They had long supervised the administration of church discipline, a practice in which the session or other governing body sat as a court to judge the merits of complaints against members for grossly sinful behavior." https://archive.org/details/organizationalre00loui
Improved to Good Article status by Yue (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 34 past nominations.
... that the novel Clermont by Regina Maria Roche was critiqued as an imitation of Anne Radcliffe's work, later gaining positive attention through Jane Austen's mention of it in Northanger Abbey?
Source: Morin, Christina (2018), "Gothic materialities: Regina Maria Roche, the Minerva Press, and the bibliographic spread of Irish gothic fiction", The gothic novel in Ireland, c. 1760–1829, Manchester University Press, pp. 170, 154–195, doi:10.2307/j.ctv3zp024.9, ISBN 978-0-7190-9917-5, JSTOR j.ctv3zp024.9, retrieved 10 May 2025
Reviewed:
5x expanded by JV MoE (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
... that Nazaruddin Dek Gam bought the Persiraja football club after several of the wealthiest men in Aceh refused to? Source: [34]: " Ada cerita menarik dibalik penguasaan 80 persen saham mayoritas oleh Nazaruddin alias Dek Gam. Ternyata proses lobi sudah dilakukan terhadap 10 orang juragan di Banda Aceh" -> "There is an interesting story behind the control of 80 percent of the majority shares by Nazaruddin alias Dek Gam. It turns out that the lobbying process has been carried out against 10 bosses in Banda Aceh." & "Dari nama-namanya boleh di bilang mereka orang terkaya di Aceh" -> "From their names, you could say they are the richest people in Aceh"
... that the fire-eye antbirds'(pictured) calls instead of songs are used to tell the species apart?
Source: In a 2017 study, researchers found that "when [they] examined Pyriglena
vocalizations in this context, the outcomes revealed substantial diversity in their calls, rather than their songs [thus it] underscores the need to consider all vocalizations in taxonomic studies."
... that Indonesian legislator Alifuddin pushed for the passage of an anti-LGBT "Family Resilience" law in response to the publicization of an incest fantasy Facebook group?
... that governor of North Sulawesi, Indonesia, Yulius Selvanus used his parents' clan names for "personal branding"? Source: [37]: "'Jadi saya mau pakai Lumbaa atau Komaling selama beradminstrasi ya pakai sesuai KTP dan itu personal branding saja,' jelasnya": "'So whether I use Lumbaa or Komaling, I use KTP [his legal name] for administrative purposes, and that's just for personal branding', he explained"
... that soon after being unable to play to 500 days due to a leg injury, footballer Mawa Sesay helped her team get the the UEFA Women's Champions League for the first time?
... that Giulio Basetti-Sani, an Italian Franciscan friar who was temporarily excommunicated for his positive view of Islam, contracted a civil marriage to do a PhD in the United States in the meantime?
Source: Sturnega, Barbara (2011). Padre Giulio Basetti Sani (1912-2001): una vita per il dialogo cristiano-musulmano. p. 71-75.
ALT1: ... that Giulio Basetti-Sani, after beginning his career as a missionary believing Muhammad to be a "prophet of Satan", ended his career believing the Quran to be a prophecy of Christ? Source: Sturnega 2011, p. 45; Marshall, David (2 January 2014). "Roman Catholic Approaches to the Qur'an since Vatican II". Islam and Christian–Muslim Relations. 25 (1): 89–100. doi:10.1080/09596410.2013.785090.
Reviewed:
Comment: I prefer the first hook since it's such a weird story; if the phrasing needs to be workshopped I'm open to feedback on that.
Created by M.A.Spinn (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
Interesting:
QPQ: - Awaiting QPQs Overall: @Jon698: Article is new enough (freed from redirect on 6/3) and long enough. Hook is interesting, though I'll have to AGF on its source since I don't have 165 bucks to spend on the book. (I probably have access through the Wikipedia Library, though...) 2 QPQs are needed since DYK is in backlog mode again, but other than that, this nomination is good to go. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk • contribs)08:13, 3 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]
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The article is new enough and long enough and adequately sourced. I did not find any close paraphrasing. All but one source is in Indonesian and offline so AGF. The picture is okay and properly licensed. However, while a QPQ has been provided, it is an incomplete review (it only checked for interestingness and length but not all of the criteria, whether explicitly or implicitly). The article does not mention her date of death, but apparently the obituary does give a date in 2008? My Indonesian is very basic and rusty, and the Google Translate translation is ambiguous: was the 2008 date her date of death, or when they learned the news of her death? Finally, I'm not really that big of a fan of the hook: is there nothing else about her that can be said? If there are no other options, we can probably go with it, but I just want to know if you have any other options. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:44, 30 March 2025 (UTC)
In the interest of this nomination moving forward, since it is already over two months old, I will be approving this as I do not think the lede issue is a problem for DYK. Whatever happens with that issue can be discussed outside DYK. I have also modified the hook per the above statement. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 07:04, 2 June 2025 (UTC)
Article expanded 5x within a week of nomination. QPQ good. Article is well-written and well-sourced, hook is interesting. Two things with the hook, though: it seems as if the hook should say "so many musicians", and the source and article seem to indicate "specialized course" rather than a crash course, as linked.~Darth StabroTalk • Contribs 03:24, 24 April 2025 (UTC)
So far so good, article passed minimum length criterion and newness. Source spot checks indicate good results, though I don't think every product name needs to be bolded? I would AGF on the interpretation that "first real-time factory-calibrated CGM system" means "without requiring calibrations". I also endorse the ALT0 hook, though I think it would be much more compact if you end the hook at "...calibrations" (no need for the "thereby eliminating the need for regular fingerstick blood tests?"). Approved! Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 04:32, 29 April 2025 (UTC)
Comment: @TarheelBornBred:The hook is not supported in the article, in particular the phrase "Don't visit Myanmar" does not appear in the article. — ERcheck (talk) 15:11, 10 May 2025 (UTC)
Full review needed now that hooks seem to be set. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:06, 1 June 2025 (UTC)
Article is new enough and long enough, is sourced, neutral and plagiarism free. However the lead needs expanding, and I was confused by this sentence "In 1977, at the age of 36, Nabili became the second female director to make a feature film in Iran after Shala Riari's Marjan in 1956, a public failure at the time, of which no trace remains." - it seems to contradict the earlier paragraph about her return in 1975, nor does it specifiy the film. If its the Sealed Soil, then it need integrating into the paragraph on that topic and the chronology of production clarifying. Lajmmoore (talk) 19:24, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
Article is new (GA) and long enough at the time of nomination. Earwig report looks good. ALT2 is interesting. The "see also" borders on the absurd, so I think there is a fundamental misunderstanding as to how we use this section. Most of these entries should be deleted. Lead section may be satisfactory for DYK, but as a recent GAN, it should be rewritten to summarize the main points of the article, which at the moment, it does not do. Use of excessively long captions also deviates from best practices. Formatting of book titles, such as Cave 1749, require italics. The date is also wrong. The book was first published a decade earlier; 1749 refers to the second edition. You don't have to type out the entire 18th century title; Geography Reformed (1739) will do as a shortened title. Remove the stray comma from "1749,". The SAGE Handbook of Historical Geography says it was anonymously authored but published by Cave. Presentation is slightly hampered by textual issues with sentences such as "These frameworks were mostly advanced mostly by human geographers..." Also, "While when the term technical geography first entered the English lexicon..." Use of quotations of common words and phrases in the "Early history and etymology" section should be replaced with paraphrasing. Book titles like Geographia and Kitab al-Buldan use italics. You write "Geography has a history spanning cultures and thousands of years and is described as a "mother science" from which more specialized disciplines emerge..." I would want to see a quote from the source on that, as it sounds incredibly unusual. Philosophy and physics are most often described as the "mother science", not geography. Perhaps something was lost in translation here as it doesn't make sense. Copyedits needed. The section on "Quantitative revolution" is an example of WP:CITEKILL. You don't need or require six citations for two sentences. You can bundle citations or use footnotes if needed. One citation per sentence is generally recommened, two if needed. Update: I went ahead and made a series of copyedits.[2] My main concern right now concerns 1) the lead section, which does not properly summarize the article or its main points, but I think DYK allows for that, so it is not an issue that has any bearing on the success of this nomination, but it does personally bother me, and I wanted to express my concerns because there will be readers who will come here to learn more and will be turned away by the lead; I know I was. Please rewrite the lead to summarize the entirety of the subject you've presented, highlighting the most significant points. 2) I like ALT2, but I'm having great difficulty verifying it based on your citations (and it doesn't appear in whole in the article, just in parts). @GeogSage: Why don't you make this as easy as possible and mine Geographia Technica[3] for a good hook and add it to this article? I see an interesting one about how technical geography was used during the COVID-19 pandemic to analyze NO2 concentrations, showing that pandemic restrictions led to emissions reductions.[4] Alternatively, I see another good hook that is already in the article, but needs some work. The information about the Michigan-Wisconsin boundary Supreme Court case would make a good hook, but you will need to return to the source to flesh it out as it isn't all that clear. I combined ALT0 and ALT1 together to get ALT3, and added the cartography bit from the "Fundamentals" section, where ALT3 appears, but shortened the entire thing. Viriditas (talk) 23:43, 24 May 2025 (UTC)
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Deiadameian I have tagged four things on in the article that require attribution. A QPQ is not needed. The picture isn't clear at a small size. SL93 (talk) 07:24, 27 May 2025 (UTC)
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Looks good to go, ALT0 is interesting and a well-formatted hook. AGF on the paywalled source. SounderBruce 04:03, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
I'm vetoing this one due to time taken, and the internal issues with the article and nomination not being rectified.--Kevmin § 00:32, 2 June 2025 (UTC)
Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 20:46, 26 May 2025 (UTC)
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Fail, per expansion within 7 days not 5x ( went from ~500 words to ~900 words). Still a nice article though. Dracophyllum 05:09, 3 May 2025 (UTC)
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Article does not meet 5x expansion. This is why DYK favors new articles. It is pretty difficult to 5x an article that isn't a stub. Take this to GAN for a second chance. Viriditas (talk) 22:56, 2 June 2025 (UTC)
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Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 18:46, 1 June 2025 (UTC)
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Reviewing... I will be reviewing this nomination. I am a new reviewer, so I will need a second opinion. NeoGaze (talk) 13:08, 22 May 2025 (UTC)
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